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| Clash181 2006-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseI love the last line. You're a great writer. |
| Katie 2006-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh. Cute. Awesome. :) A+ |
| Shellster 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. You have some fantasic talent. Great job. |
| StrawberryGregLover 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseOh WOW! That was AMAZING! You are such a good writer! Sara |
| gerfan 2006-01-31 ch 1, anon. | abusethats so sad, but sweet, that he was trying to keep her warm, like the descriptions. I like the touching parts |
| hazelmom 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Visceral. Evocative. I really liked it. There are a few places where I couldn't see what was happening, but it doesn't take away from the mood of the piece. I can't wait to read another story of yours. sheila |
| v-volatile 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseoh ** hell. well DONE. i went to read your work because you left an Extremely Grammatically Correct Review, so i knew you would be a good writer. but this was excellent. the temperature motifs, the spare yet realistic dialogue. and you write without a trace, too! i won't get my work done tonight, i know. (excuse my lack of capitalization. sheer laziness.) |
| Angelfirenze 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseTold you I'd favorite it. *bright grin* |
| brynnamorgan 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseLove the writing style, your method of story telling. Excellent! |
| lkq 2006-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like your style of writing in this - the randomness of thoughts tucked in seem fitting for a near-death experience, The descriptions are evocative and there are both dark and light elements throughout; it requires a bit more absorption than just a quick read-through allows. |