 zenachi 2009-11-10 . chapter 9T.T.. Discontinued.. |
 narutonarutolove 2009-10-27 . chapter 9when hinata was little she had short hair,but in shippuden her hair was now long |
 animefreak03 2009-07-10 . chapter 9 hey hey, I hope you are still writing fan fiction. I love your work and would love to know if you will continue with this one. Please please, continue if it's not too much to ask. : ( pouts |
 winneythepooh 2009-07-07 . chapter 2 this is a lil chessy how is he going to feel this sudden urge to protect/love her? he's only known hr for a few hours? thst;s a lil creepy |
 math music reading 2009-07-03 . chapter 9This is amazing! I love your wonderful writing style, everything flows so well and the characters are all so alive and realistic! You have them down perfectly and I have to know what happens! Please update soon! Will Neji be entering any time soon? You're even getting me to like Gaara better as someone close to Hinata! |
 Death by Me 2009-04-11 . chapter 9ah. rawr. update. please. please. i really wanna know what happens |
 1 2009-03-22 . chapter 9 a voice, hm...
ithink i can do that...
nice story. I can't think of anything that really needs to be improved.
(ok, so maybe I think it's awesome! what's wrong with that?!)
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 Ookami Tsubasawa 2009-02-01 . chapter 9I have to say that I absolutely love every single character!
(Especially devil Sasuke and Gaara XD they have the best personalities!)
I love how descriptive your writing is and how it has comedy yet doesn't become stupid or unrealistic. You kept me smiling pretty much the whole way through so far and I don't think there's a single chapter I haven't liked.
Hinata's and Sasuke's relationship is amazing :D I really love the plot so far!
I hope you can update soon! Thank you for writing! |
 Cloud Envy Shikamaru 2009-01-24 . chapter 9OMG! THIS STORY IS SO FRIGGIN AWESOME!
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLEASE update again soon!
Like soon, soon! Like as so as you get this review soon! lol! No really! I am dying to know what happens next!
It's almost killing me! I mean, after the club are they going to have a quick romp or what? lol! just kiddin! ;-P
so plz continue this story ASAP!
~CES~ |
 Rakero-chan 2008-12-28 . chapter 9Please continue! |
 inadey 2008-12-25 . chapter 9hi um can't wait till u update this is getting good |
 Makoto Tsuki Yukimura 2008-12-19 . chapter 9I want the next chapter! ^^ What happens next? I so curious. |
 SHeWithNoName 2008-12-14 . chapter 9OMG!V I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! ESPECIALLY WHEN IT'S A REALLY GOOD STORY! |
 wolkokmo 2008-11-08 . chapter 9 theehe this is a funny story. theteete |
 Chittu 2008-11-01 . chapter 9 omg...ah...its soo good..i love it...please hury with next chapter |