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Blackdex
2009-08-11 . chapter 14
Please continue. ciao
s
2009-08-02 . chapter 14
This is a really great fic. I'm curious about what Faith discussed with the Chairman when she asked Harry to leave the room. I know it has been awhile, but you really should continue this, it is really great. The one think I'm not yet convinced of is a Faith/Harry pairing. But you never know...
Devilishly-Charming
2009-08-02 . chapter 14
I'm so so sorry to see that this fic is abandoned. This is such a great story! Your take on each character is dead on. Atleast if I say so. I really wanted to see what happened next.
shiftyless
2009-07-23 . chapter 8
I think this is goodly
Hmmmm
2009-07-14 . chapter 14
It has been a year...
J12
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
This was an excellent crossover, one of the best in the buffy/hp category. Everything was written to a degree of excellence that one can't really expect from fanfiction. There were, however, two things that in my opinion, damaged the story a great deal.

The first thing really isn't a big deal, it's really just slightly irritating in how cliche it is - the rags to riches bit with the slayer trust fund at Gringotts. I like that for once Harry wasn't the party to become a multimillionaire in a matter of minutes, but it's still a bit irritating to see, since it happens in so many fics.

The second issue I have almost made me stop reading the fic. Faith is a Mary-Sue, plain and simple. She's beautiful, she's smart, she's super-strong, she's a master of hand to hand combat, she's super street smart, she's got a tragic past, and she's got a bad-girl appeal to her. Admittedly, that's all cannon for BTVS. The problem lies in the fact that in addition to all of that, you made her a witch. And not just any witch, but apparently some kind of magical prodigy, that can unintentionally levitate a desk without even properly learning a single spell, and manages to kill a large group of death eaters with a fourth year spell using a wand that's not attuned to her, in what appears to be the second spell we've ever seen her cast.

Personally, I think that a powerful wizard and a powerful slayer would complement each others abilities quite well, there's no need to cross into the boundary of the mary sue when both characters are extremely formidable opponents without even slightly stretching their cannon abilities, let alone stretching them to the degree of this story.

I hope you take this as the constructive criticism it is, since I have really enjoyed your fic, and I'm terribly disappointed to see there aren't any recent updates.
Selene Appia
2009-05-25 . chapter 14
Great fic, really. :-) And a crossover too.
DarkStrider
2009-05-09 . chapter 1
Awesome. I love the plot and characterisations. Will you be continuing?
brolly501
2009-02-08 . chapter 14
good story
Apocalypse Thou
2009-01-27 . chapter 14
This was a great story and i was devestated to see that it ended. I VERY rarely read "7th year" stories and only read this due to the cross-over, but i definately enjoyed it.

I was looking forward to Harry getting closer to Faith. It's a shame we didn't get to see it.
TeddyLupin67890
2009-01-22 . chapter 14
Great story. Will you be continuing it or is it abandoned?
Morgan Daratrazanoff
2009-01-10 . chapter 14
Great!! Update soon!!
spedclass
2008-12-05 . chapter 2
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
spedclass
2008-12-05 . chapter 1
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
AngelwithDirtyToughts
2008-11-21 . chapter 14
Love the story, update soon! ; ))
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