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Tmctflyboy
2008-03-05
ch 7,
abuselove the story, glad that it is still being continued
joegood2003
2008-02-09
ch 7,
abuse"It was never an issue." LOL...I must be getting slow in my old age Rhia. I completely missed this the first time I read your update. Great piece of work. You handled all the characters so well. Never had any trouble knowing what they were feeling even though the story is totally in the Logan POV. You've set up a very interesting "spy" caper and I'm looking forward to finding out which of the clues you've dropped on us are true and which are red herrings. Poor Logan, never underestimate the female of the species.
NavyCrockett
2008-02-07
ch 7,
abuseYay! You're back! I can't wait to see where you take this next, but I fully expect some major butt-kicking going on. I'm anxiously awaiting the next installments...
CaptMacKenzie
2008-01-31
ch 7,
abuseBeautiful character interaction as always, along with your characteristic low-down grit. Thanks for the update.

My 92-yr-old grandfather just died after a long and painful decline, and seeing my mom's reaction I know how much it hurts to lose a parent no matter how old they are, even when it's been expected. Hope you're doing OK, darling. God bless you.
Taluliaka
2008-01-30
ch 7, anon.
abuseHey.

I'm glad you're back.
Excellent chapter and I'm looking forward to ANSWERS!!

I'm sorry to hear about your loss and I hope you're coping ok.

Update soon!

Love Taluliaka
BTW: Don't bother coming to my profile. I haven't updated. *hangs head in shame*
MidLifeCrisis
2008-01-30
ch 7,
abuseGREAT BIG SIGH OF RELIEF! And yeah, I hope a follow up doesn't take half a year. I settle for a couple months 'cuz we got other stuff to do, too. This is worth the wait and all the bits and pieces ya sent over the prior months fit nicely. Perfection as ever, my dear friend.
Thyn
2007-11-22
ch 6,
abuseWOW. Very good story. THANK you. Newest (6) chapter is especially good. Your pain/regeneration description rivals with the best Wolverine comics. I truly hope that you are still writing this story. And hope to read chapter 7 ASAP.
When I looked this chapter I thought that one line one sentence structure would sound clumsy, but I was completely wrong, lucky me. It creates just right atmosphere, Logan's thought are painfull and hard labored.
I thought that Moira is an idiot when they ** up Logan's healing factor in the first place, but I thought that she learned something. But no, ** idiot is still offering drugs. Shovel them up yer own ** Moira. Man's healing factor is over taxed all ready, cleaning his system from drugs gives it only more work. Idiot. I hope that she will do better with other stuff. And starts using her brains. STAY away from ** drugs Moira.
;)
You really can write, and I hope that I will get to read lots of your Wolverine stories. Your Wolverine/Logan _is_ real Wolverine/Logan. And that is my greatest compliment for fanfiction. Once more, thank you for writing this stories so I could read them.
bluebell
2007-10-14
ch 6, anon.
abusePlease, please, please, update! I miss this fic so much... :(
BlackDewInTheMorning
2007-07-27
ch 6,
abuse

You are killing me.

I may have to stop by for a more lucid review later. Let us just say that I am shocked, hooked, and dying along with Wolverine. Let us pray that my healing factor is doing better than his or you might find yourself missing a now-addicted reader.

I still can't get over how much I love how you tell the story from Logan's POV. This last chapter especially just wrenches on how his mind is working, on how the pain is overwhelming his system. This is where you see his true strength, and it's leaving me breathless.

Please don't wait too long for the next chapter!



BlackDew
Tmctflyboy
2007-07-24
ch 6,
abuselove the story, hope that you update it soon. wonder if logan finds the guys that blew up the boat?
Kituse
2007-06-21
ch 6, anon.
abuseOMG! this is awsome! The style that chap. 6 is written in is very effective for convaying how Logan's mind is working at this point. the plot is very origanl, congrats. It's not that comman anymore. I reall y hope you plan to update very soon. The only part I dislike is the level of swearing, but you make it fit more. I guess I just don't like swearing. Oh, and i love all the nicknames, especially for Summers. lol.
joegood2003
2007-05-10
ch 6,
abuseHey Rhia...that was brilliant! At first I thought that your word processor had gone wonky on you, but it really works. All those short sentences are like tortured gasps of air. It really made the pain and horror of Logan's injuries real. Now I don't have any room to complain here, but I bloody well hope you don't leave us hanging too long.
CaptMacKenzie
2007-05-08
ch 6,
abuseHey! Glad to her from you at last! As usual it's very vivid, emotive writing, and really engrossing. BUT, I was disappointed at the shortness! I mean, the page was long but it was all disjointed stream-of-consciousness, so it didn't get the story very far along .. I feel like we're still in the same cliffhanger as last chapter! :( Don't tell me you've run out of ideas! I know RL is distracting, and all, but we miss you!
:-D
MidLifeCrisis
2007-05-08
ch 6,
abuseAMEN!
HALLELUJAH!
Feel better now?
I do-and motivated as well.
MLC.
Taluliaka
2007-05-08
ch 6, anon.
abuse1st impression: THIS IS SO CONVENIENT! MY EYES ONLY HAVE TO TRAVEL A FEW FEET ACROSS THE PAGE BEFORE THE NEXT LINE BEGINS!

2nd impression: IS THIS COUPLE OF WORDS A LINE THING DELIBERATE? 'TIS STARTING TO ANNOY ME.

3rd impression: HEE HEE...HEE HE'S TALKING TO HIS ARM.

4th impression: IF MOIRA PUTS HIM BACK INTO THAT 15 CHAPTER LONG MEDICAL SPIEL I WILL KILL SOMEONE.

5th impression: NO DON'T FAINT OR YOU'LL START DYING AGAIN IN A MED LAB AND BLEEDING EVERYWHERE AND PEOPLE SPEAKING MEDICAL JARGON TO YOU AND REPLACING YOUR ORGANS AND MESSING UP YOUR HEALING FACTOR TO THE POINT OF DEATH! MY HEAD WILL EXPLODE!

6th impression: WHY ARE THEY INJURED AGAIN? OH YEAH. BOMB.

7th impression: OH. IT ENDED. THAT WAS GOOD.

Please continue soon.
Love Taluliaka
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