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| angelvala87 2008-09-15 ch 3, | abuseHilarious.. I love it! |
| Trishkafibble 2008-07-02 ch 3, | abuseM...lovely! The fact that everyone is willing to spend their time off looking for Rodney is both heartwarming and very believable, and the characterization is well done throughout. Plus all of the little details--Markham's Ipod, the Athosian furniture, Kavanaugh's lab...beautiful! Thanks so much! |
| JovianJeff 2007-09-14 ch 3, | abuseA wonderful story. Surprised me with the John 'seeing' the various visions as Elizabeth spoke. That was a nice touch of an active Atlantis. I liked how you dealt with Rodney trying to deal with the deaths he'd seen, how they affected his inability to sleep and the friendships shown not just by John and Carson, but by the other nameless fellow expeditioners who are (like you beautifully phrased through John) apart of this village community. Thank you for writing this story! |
| Jordan McKenzie 2007-01-01 ch 3, | abuseAn absolutely wonderful story! You had me at the beginning and didn't let go. More! More! What lovely Rodney/Sheppard/Carson angst! |
| Gundambaby 2006-11-08 ch 3, | abuseXD omg, how cute! SHeppard boring McKay to sleep! just like my mom used to... |
| Sholio 2006-04-21 ch 3, | abuse(smile) So sweet! I loved the Rodney-Sheppard friendship and also loved how you worked in Carson and little bits of everyone else. A very nice wrap-up to the episode ... the real episode should have done something like this. |
| Xtin2000 2006-04-03 ch 3, | abuseThis is good. Man, am I glad John got over his reserve and started talking to Carson :) The story here is so cute! Friendship is and inevitable thing to happen between them all if you put it that way, and this here must be the ways that they all got close and closer to each other, I can totally picture this kind of ting to take place behind the scenes, great job in keeping everyone in character |
| Alasse Faelivrin 2006-03-02 ch 3, | abuseaw such a sweet one. Tho poor Rodney never got his coffee.. ;) |
| fififolle 2006-02-24 ch 3, | abuseJust beautiful. I hope everyone who asks for fics about stimulant withdrawal finds this. It was perfect. I couldn't put it down. Kavanagh. Of course. Carson and John planning was priceless! The atmosphere in the lab was thick with tension, I was spellbound, really. Describing John's 'look' was genius. Ah, Rodney, you wrote him so well, just wanted to hug him, John did a nice job, real nice. Poor Rodney, his head filled with all those souls, nasty. I almost cried when he read the label on the Ipod. Poor Markham *sniff*. Well done John and Carson. I really, realy loved reading that. |
| fififolle 2006-02-24 ch 2, | abuseThis is a terrific read, smooth and sharp ;) Bringing Carson into this had me melted into a puddle. I mean, Carson in a knitted jumper and an asbestos mouth *fans self*. There were some super lines, like the red t-shirt, and the 'what would McKay do'. John is doing a great job, and so is everyone else. |
| fififolle 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. What an utterly brilliant opener. I always wanted to hear that speech, and it was good, very good ;) John's mind's eye was a neat tool. Glad to know Zelenka is in good hands. I liked Caldwell, so you must have done a fantastic job there LOL. Nah, he's OK really. But where is Rodney? I'm glad I can move right on... |
| flah7 2006-02-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseJust found this story. It was fantastic. Fit the characters so incredibly well. Could see and hear them moving, could almost see the corridors, the labs etc. Rodney's exhaustion was so tangible. Fantastic story. thanks for the nod, really appreciate it. |
| Sarie Venea 2006-02-11 ch 3, | abuseI don't know if I have already reviewed, and frankly, I don't care, but this is amazing. I just re-read it, wow. Great job. Loved the character portrayal, you nailed them. |
| Asano 2006-02-11 ch 3, | abuseI still love the fact that it's Kavanaugh that actually finds him. "Sensors indicate an unauthorized presence in my labs"...priceless. I love this story, and it was fun to beta read it and see the finished product. :) |
| Titan5 2006-02-09 ch 3, | abuseVery nice. The characters are right on. It's good to have friends that will hunt you down when you need it and tuck you in. Sounds like the only way to survive when you're that far away fighting the likes of the wraith. |