It your back than do me a itsy bitsy favor

FINISH THE STORY!

thank you

Gommen that I,m say this but

I HATE YOU!

finish the dam story!

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You must update this, it's amazing. I also love how you've made Hawkmon have a rather big role in this, most people just seem to ignore him and it kinda saddens me. But you didn't and I could just glomp you for it. xD Please update soon!

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I would like to be able to read your fanfic horn the I finish I surrender because to be frank it is incredible please you finish it if

This is a great story. I hope you start again

Yay! Please update! I really like this and I want to continue reading it!

Sorry, I was reading and i just have to point it out. Help is "Tatsukete". I like your idea, though!

The Infamos ballroom seqence? Oh well ill find out later! U r a good writer!*sends u a virtual cheesecake* Mew u rock 4 puting up wit her! I no I couldnt...

hello! AGAIN
please answer or at least update men i update more then you do, i mean wid my gcse exams and everything, and this is like d 10th time i'm writing, and i bet u might get tired of reading, but i still don't believe i haven't flamed u, well i'll make sure the next one is a flame, cause i have a feeling i will have to flame about 500 times before u update, or more like u r never gonna update, 'sigh' where is d ball room u promised, i now wil not bother being polite mate, so bring dt fic out, or r u just hanging me on and r never actully gonna complete it,
well?
answer?
update?
recieve flames from me?
which is it gonna be out of the three the choice is yours and i hope u number 2 that will make everyone happy
luv
yolei

hey dis is yolei
this is about d 4th e-mail i'm sending u.
u keep e-mailing back ur gonna continue
but u don't, i'm gonna start crying now if u don't continue (snif snif boo hoo) i come everyday to check on you.
by the way here is an idea if you wanna write a fic first finish it on your computer then post it chapter by chapter that saves you the time of having to write it when you get lots of flames and e-mails telling you to write it.
so u betta continueand bring it sooner, i loved ur fic and i don't think i'll be able to read it all because u see i will not be alowed to go on the internet after june that is when i've finished doing my gcses, so please hurry up, ur gonna make me cry, boo hoo,
so till next time, don't make me write to you again, bah bye]
luv u
yolei
ps. i'm warning you i'll cry :'(

*claps delightedly* OOh, very good, very good! Ken and DemiDevimon both-THE ROMANCE HAS TAKEN THEM! MWAHAHAHA! IT'S IN THE AIR!
Bass: RUN!
_ Very enjoyable chapter, as always! But-but what's this? IT'S THE LAST ONE! *chokes; begins shaking Ryuko* You must write more! You must post another chapter! Must must must!
Bass: *picks up Avis and drags her out kicking* Sorry about this...she gets a bit excited.

"We're small! We like small!" XD That was quite amusing...
Nothing to critique, only things to love! :3 *begins dancing around singing songs about love and throwing flowers everywhere*
Bass: ...can I hit her? Please?
AC: Sure.
Bass: *WHOP*
X.x *ugh* Lik-ed...it...next...chap-ter...gh

_ *wide grin* He's back! The bold duo of Miyako and DemiDevimon unite once more! Together, the Child Of Love and The...uh...Bowling Ball of...uh...Much Stubborness And Common Sense shall take on their evil foe and be VICTORIOUS!
...if they can stop yelling at each other for five minutes first.
XD I love how you write those two together. DemiDevimon is very well-done, and as a pair they're incredibly amusing.
Wormmon and Hawkmon's little talk was touching, and I'm glad to see Ken FINALLY feeling a bit of emotion over SOMETHING..._ *is eager to see more of it* Next chapter, we go!