Reviews for A Maze of Digimon

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Switchback 2007-11-03 ch 6,	abuseYou must update this, it's amazing. I also love how you've made Hawkmon have a rather big role in this, most people just seem to ignore him and it kinda saddens me. But you didn't and I could just glomp you for it. xD Please update soon! ~Switchback
Blue_azul_acero 2007-05-19 ch 6, 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I would like to be able to read your fanfic horn the I finish I surrender because to be frank it is incredible please you finish it if ^ ^
Kyere 2007-03-19 ch 6, anon.	abuseThis is a great story. I hope you start again
BlAcK silhOUeTTe 2006-02-28 ch 6,	abuseYay! Please update! I really like this and I want to continue reading it!
Hiei's Ningen Mate 2004-07-17 ch 1,	abuseSorry, I was reading and i just have to point it out. Help is "Tatsukete". I like your idea, though!
BabyDee56 2004-06-30 ch 6, anon.	abuseThe Infamos ballroom seqence? Oh well ill find out later! U r a good writer!sends u a virtual cheesecake Mew u rock 4 puting up wit her! I no I couldnt...
Yolei- Kens-Lover 2004-01-23 ch 6,	abusehello! AGAIN please answer or at least update men i update more then you do, i mean wid my gcse exams and everything, and this is like d 10th time i'm writing, and i bet u might get tired of reading, but i still don't believe i haven't flamed u, well i'll make sure the next one is a flame, cause i have a feeling i will have to flame about 500 times before u update, or more like u r never gonna update, 'sigh' where is d ball room u promised, i now wil not bother being polite mate, so bring dt fic out, or r u just hanging me on and r never actully gonna complete it, well? answer? update? recieve flames from me? which is it gonna be out of the three the choice is yours and i hope u number 2 that will make everyone happy luv yolei
Yolei- Kens-Lover 2004-01-16 ch 1,	abusehey dis is yolei this is about d 4th e-mail i'm sending u. u keep e-mailing back ur gonna continue but u don't, i'm gonna start crying now if u don't continue (snif snif boo hoo) i come everyday to check on you. by the way here is an idea if you wanna write a fic first finish it on your computer then post it chapter by chapter that saves you the time of having to write it when you get lots of flames and e-mails telling you to write it. so u betta continueand bring it sooner, i loved ur fic and i don't think i'll be able to read it all because u see i will not be alowed to go on the internet after june that is when i've finished doing my gcses, so please hurry up, ur gonna make me cry, boo hoo, so till next time, don't make me write to you again, bah bye] luv u yolei ps. i'm warning you i'll cry :'(
Avis 2004-01-06 ch 6, anon.	abuseclaps delightedly OOh, very good, very good! Ken and DemiDevimon both-THE ROMANCE HAS TAKEN THEM!! MWAHAHAHA!! IT'S IN THE AIR!! Bass: RUN! ^_^ Very enjoyable chapter, as always! But-but what's this?! IT'S THE LAST ONE! chokes; begins shaking Ryuko You must write more! You must post another chapter! Must must must! Bass: picks up Avis and drags her out kicking Sorry about this...she gets a bit excited.
Avis 2004-01-06 ch 5, anon.	abuse"We're small! We like small!" XD That was quite amusing... Nothing to critique, only things to love! :3 begins dancing around singing songs about love and throwing flowers everywhere Bass: ...can I hit her? Please? AC: Sure. Bass: WHOP X.x ugh Lik-ed...it...next...chap-ter...gh
Avis 2004-01-06 ch 4, anon.	abuse^_^ wide grin He's back! The bold duo of Miyako and DemiDevimon unite once more! Together, the Child Of Love and The...uh...Bowling Ball of...uh...Much Stubborness And Common Sense shall take on their evil foe and be VICTORIOUS!! ...if they can stop yelling at each other for five minutes first. XD I love how you write those two together. DemiDevimon is very well-done, and as a pair they're incredibly amusing. Wormmon and Hawkmon's little talk was touching, and I'm glad to see Ken FINALLY feeling a bit of emotion over SOMETHING...^_^ is eager to see more of it Next chapter, we go!
Avis 2004-01-06 ch 3, anon.	abuseXD Miyako and DemiDevimon--what a wonderful pair! hysterics That entire scenario, from the moment it started to the moment it ended and beyond, was solid gold. They were both written believably, and their respective personalities made for an amusing fire-works show. ^_^ Stellar! Another thing I thought I might point out; having Wormmon explain the reason for and the effect of the Dream Spheres was a bit redundant to me. A person would only say something like this if the person they were speaking to had no idea what the Dream Spheres were or did, and I hope that Ken knew what they were, if he was involved in making them. O.o But then again, I suppose evil overlords have a lot to do, and a little absent-mindedness could be spared our annoyance… I think it could be easily fixed by having Hawkmon ask what the Dream Spheres were or make some comment appertaining to them… ^_^ Next chapter! WHE-I haven’t had this much fun reading a fic in a long while!
Avis 2004-01-06 ch 2, anon.	abuse^_^ Whee, more fun! Miyako's confusion and anger were well-shown; her altercation with Hawkmon was sad, but realistic and therefore good. ;D The ending was on a funny note, which I very much liked! Miyako's laugh-fest was hilarious, although I thought I'd point one thing out, author-wise: "It made the evil Kaiser confused." I think it would have been better to change that to something like "Obviously, the Kaiser was somewhat confused" or some more 'official' and 'proper-sounding' sentence; I think it would have added to the humor. And the whole lawyer business made me fall into hysterics. YOU TELL EM, RYUKO!!
Avis 2004-01-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseE, Kenyako! ^__^ I used to think Hikari was actually better for Ken...but viewpooints change over time. happy happy happy over finding you write about Ken, whom she loves Whee! The opening paragraphs were especially good. Poromon's interaction with Miyako was sweet, as well...and (dare I say it?) the end note was hilarious. XD On to the next chapter!
Spara 2003-10-16 ch 6, anon.	abuseAw... Ken's falling for Miyako ^_^ (Didn't see that coming sarcasm) This is a really great piece of fiction, but you know that already, I guess... But it was like a year or so since you've updated last time... I dunno if you even are going to complete this fic... But I think that you HAVE to complete it! Otherwise I'll be mad... And you don't want to see that happen... (And if you have writers block, I can help out... ^_^) Ja ne /Spara

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