lol, great story about trying to write something ^^

This suked more than the first one please just give up

None of the guys helped, especially the first three. Chopper didn't know but I won't count him in because of that. Yes, love is a complicated thing. It is a wonderful feeling that is truly hard to ignore and is known to eat at you until the day you die. Yes, love is...such a complicated thing... Love...greatest feeling...in the world...

great too

It was an extremely well-written story,i'd have to say.
You did have a few spelling mistakes here and there,but it was very well-structured story nonethless.
I especially loved how you made the start and end of the story,it actually seems rather rare in fanfictions to write them that way.

This is a cute and funny story. Please make some more. Luffy and Nami forever.

Hey! like it lots! Keep writing more one piece!

~You're loving Capitan,
Pirated

Very cute. Usually a LN fic describes its point of view from Nami's side. Here, we get it from Luffy's, and that's a refreshing change. Luffy's character is damn hard to pin down, but you did it okay. Not OOC.

7/10

You've been added to the "Pirate King, Pirate Queen" C2 list. ;)

This was cute. Great job.:) I don't see the OOC you mentioned though.

Im starting to become a bigger and bigger fan of your fanfictions! They are simply awesome. It's halirious how Usopp told his story. ^_^ You gotta write more LuNa fanfics! They totally ROCK!

That was great ^__^ I enjoyed it tons!

~ Uozumi