Oww man this is so cute and sweet and adorable and perfect. We need more of this couple, I just think they're perfect for each other ;n; The way you wrote this is super sweet and delicate, I can visualize everything so clearly. And I ADORE that last scene in the train! To favs!

That put a huge smile on my face! Really amazing. Great job!

Damn, you sure write for a lot of fandoms. Glad I came across your FLCL one...

I really love this piece, it really made me smile. And it suits them both... Even as the type of person Ninamori is, it really does suit her. It's really... cute sia ]

Great job, ja ne.

Very well done!

Aww too cute. Take care, Elsie.

Aww, cute.

I haven't come across too many Ninamori/Naota fics and this is so refreshing and satisfying to read. It was straight to the point, simple and brilliant.

Really cool.

What else can I say? Ninamori is adorable!

Perfect capture of Naota and Ninamori's romance. I like the emphasis on the subtlety of their relationship, and how they're still so oblivious to the fact despite everyone else knowing.

Perfect!

Sweet

Excellently done. It seems alot longer then it actually is. Its drew me in. Simple, sweet and everything that a fic needs. Great job

Cute and amusing. Very well done