Yes, I agree with one of the other reviews, the last line was good, really, it was _. I also like your writing style- it's very catchy and engaging.

This story goes in my favorites _

Wow! I really like how you formatted this, it was very neat. I loved it. Great job! And the last line is really good. XD

interesting point of view of the whole problem/story of the Kudo's and Ban