Hey Quinn

It's me L, dont u do it. Although I think u already did. & if u did then I'm going to b very unhappy. But I kow u did what's right for the story & the characters.

Bracing myself for what comes next, Legair

MORE! Please.

Thank you for making them incestous. I am SO curious as to what's gonna happen now... I keep thinking the sorceress should simply cast another spell to make people forget they're twins or something.

Oh, and when you're done with this series, write a He-man and She-ra on a deserted island pwp? ;)

Wow...That was...deep.
Nice work on this, and I can't wait for the sequel! ^_^
...I feel really bad for Adam and Adora, though. Not to mention the baby.

WOW! I've really enjoyed all the stories in this series much, much more than I thought I would. You've addressed what is the ultimate taboo with just the right amount of grace, finess, and maturity. You've made the whole situation credible and heartbreaking. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Only one thing bothered me, and that was the abrupt change from Adam's POV to Adora's. I don't personally think you should do line breaks like you've done in your other stories, as that would break away from the seamless flow you have going now. Maybe something from Adam like "I look at Adora and wonder what she is feeling." would do it. Just a suggestion.

I'm hoping to see the next installment very, very soon! :-)

*re-attaches jaw*

YAY! ANOTHER CHAPTER! YAY! ANOTHER CHAPTER!

But how cruel for it to be so short =P

Yet another twisty chapter, I bet all fans of this storlyine were eager for the aftermath to unfold...but joy to know another chapter's on the way!

How angsty! I loved Adora's rebellious thoughts in this, too. Ironic, considering she's the leader of the Rebels ^_~ Again, awesome insight to the characters thoughts...Adam needs a bear hug from Adora!

Thanks for yet another long awaited and awesome chapter - please hurry with the next one!