This story is so cute! I think it's a very realistic reaction to a realistic situation. Loved it! This story definitely needs a sequel! Please?

I absolutely love this. So sweet, yet not overly done. Excellent job!!

Aw. That is so cute! *huggles you again* XD

Very cute.

Yes, one day. That was so sweet. I can see how a child could see through Bruce's facade. Nice.

That was so perfect. I love that. Bruce getting hugged in the middle of the day by a little girl like that, I don't know, something about that scenario grabs at you, touches you. Possibly the sweetest moment I've ever... experienced.

Would you add on to this? It would certainly be worth it. Even just one more chapter.

Peace, love and joy,
MG*

Cool. Make you think that Barbara Gordon doesn't necessarily have to be Batgirl, hm!

Cool! Are you going to write more with Jen in it? I like her lol But then she has nearly the same name as me so I guess I'm predisposed to like her heh. I really enjoy reading your stuff! Great writing :)

THIS IS SO COOL! A sequel would be great, you know... *hint hint, wink wink, nudge nudge*

Great job!

Oh, wow! I love this story. I absolutely love it and the ending was perfect. Sorry I didn't review 'Lapses' but I loved it too. The one thing I would mention is that you do have a few spelling mistakes. I know your bio said you weren't very good at spelling, but most of them a spell checker or a good beta reader can catch.

Omg that is so cute! I loved it. :D

Delia Ra'Nar-

I love the way you did this. The inclusion of Jenn in the both Lapses and Identity is pure genius! It shows that Bruce and indeed the Batman are far from inhuman. He has a tender fatherly side, and despite what he may think that side of him gives him strength.

I hope that you will write another story with Jenn and Bruce/Batman interacting. It is a very important aspect that I think gets left out of the character moreoften then not. What I love is that you have Jenn young enough not to be influenced by the media and others gossip about Batman and his alternate persona, but she is old enough to put two and two togther. Not only to discover his mask, but also not to reveal the secret.

This has been added to my favorites list as well as Lapses. Thanks for writing.

Ancelin

P.S. Is there anymore to come in this particular story? I need to know whither to put it on my alerts list!!

Ok, that was super cute too. I didn't mention this in the review of your other story, but I did say it to my friends as I was reading this (because I subject them to whatever I'm reading. I'm mean like that). No matter how it's done, the klutz image cracks me up. And yeah, I bet that is fun. Caribbean, man..

Anyway, another very good story :D

I read Lapses and thought there has to be a sequal and lo adn behold I found it! I love your work. It must be fun writing Jenn she's uh...six or whatever but she's surprisingly smart. She deduced that Bruce Wayne was Batman. Impressive. Great job and best of luck on any future stories you create!

That was so sweet I absolutly love it!:)):)):): it's one of my absolutly fav stories:):)):