that is really good keep writing more stories!

AW! Gosh! that made me CRY! seriously!! i'm in tears right now! that was so CUTE! and funny at the same time

"He looks healthier than a Champion Racehorse, Phil," she announced. Phil rolled his eyes.

"Yeah, thanks for that, I was so worried he wouldn’t be able to run next week,"

ahahahhahahahahaha I just LOVED that part it was great! it made me laugh. You are a effin' awesome writer of these types of stories! ^_^

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Shadow

Yep, it's a very "teary" story; like the one from the golden "Hey Arnold" age (somewhere in 2002). It's very pleasant to know that somebody still follows the tradition of classical sappy story. I'm looking forward for your new stories.

And what have you meant by words "slow starting"? Everything is just fine I think.

Aw what a happy and cute story. Helga was so brave sacrificng her life for Arnold. Do you believe in angels?

Wonderful story! Is great drama at times, and at others in a excellent romance fic.

Yes, Helga is just to stubborn to die that easily, and Arnold can stop from helping anyone, not even if that kills him (it happened three times on this story!)

Keep the good writing.