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WhiteElfElder
2009-08-24 . chapter 15
Sounds like either a transfiguration or a nicely done replacement. Can't kill Harry off so easily and this other is the imposter trying to take hold. Nicely done for a cliff-hanger though.
zfish9
2009-06-20 . chapter 15
all right you have got me hooked. how and when will the next story come out. great build up between stories. they are getting better in plot lines with each writing.
omh666
2009-06-16 . chapter 13
So let me see if I've got this right. Harry is the wolf. His lover is the panther. Gin is the fox. Voldemort is the serpent. Minister is the shark. Dumbledor is the singing pest. All that's left is the chimp. Is the chimp Ron?
riegert8
2009-05-04 . chapter 15
why a sequel since that main character is dead, Can't really be a Harry Potter story without Harry Potter. I was going to read both part of this story, but I really don't care for that Harry died.
nxkris
2009-04-11 . chapter 15
wonderful story. when will you put the sequel up? i am guessing harry travels back in time or something along that line, but please put it up soon.
blackruby873
2009-01-09 . chapter 15
Some how they are going to end up the same person in the end. Hope for the sequl soonn\
disappointed
2008-11-13 . chapter 15
I'm sorry I wasted my time reading this and the first story. Very lame ending, I say that as it's three months since you posted this and have yet to start the sequel.
writer-of-deathandlife
2008-08-27 . chapter 15
kool do the sequel soon
Maxmilian
2008-08-26 . chapter 15
WHOA what a way to end a story xD
I hope the sequel is comming up soon.
Rabid Reader 4
2008-08-23 . chapter 15
Well done. NOt really screaming... I think I get it. Harry got sent back into time, where he truly came to become the Lord Silver Wolf. He worked, trained, and became the hard Lord that he would need to be when he finally confronted his enemies back in the future.

Silver Wolf did not kill him, he simply sent him to the past as was necessary to complete the loop. The Harry Potter part of his personae had pretty much died in order for him to become the person/being he needed to be.

I could be wrong... but you did a great job of foreshadowing the event. I look forward to reading your sequel and hope that you will post in this story when the next one is up.
Fred the Man
2008-08-22 . chapter 15
That was cruel to end it there. I agree with the suggestion that Lord Wolf is really Harry's future self, gone back in time to ensure the defeat of Voldemort. The girls will not be happy with Harry for making them think he is dead.
Vukk
2008-08-22 . chapter 15
More like what you did was stupid and not reading anything you write again. I don't understand why any author would kill the main character halfway through a story. These are Harry Potter fanfics...
Darth Demon2
2008-08-21 . chapter 15
My GOD what a TERRIBLE cliffie.
Dark Dragen
2008-08-21 . chapter 15
Another great chapter and end to the story mate, I like the fight with Harry and the Death Eaters. LoL - I know where you're going with this, and what give it away was this part of what Lord Wolf said - 'but when you live two lives some times one must die for the other to survive.' This was something along the lines that Harry was thinking when he thought the Death Eaters, I wouldn't be surprised that the next story we see is when Harry goes back in time to sort things out. :P It also helped that the book just 'appeared' out of no where.

PLEASE do the next part SOON, as I want to see if I'm right or not.
Shedao
2008-08-14 . chapter 14
Hey, I REALLY like this story. Please, update when you can.
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