Umm, sorry but jus from skimming this I know that you need to increase the rating to at least a T. the swearing and the theme's are well beyond K range.

LOVED IT!

Ah-mazing.

oh! so cute! great job!

sweet

aww that was cute

Ohh...soo cute. I loved it. I'm glad they had a happy ending!

Your stories are so cool. I just keep reading more and more of them.

hey,

could you continue the story...its great

i like stories after the leave hogwarts but there are not many

so i get excited when i see one..lol

aw...very cute

i love this story, please update soon, big kiss the next mrs black

aw

this is such a sweet oneshot!have you written nething else?

how cute! omgosh i loved it!

i really liked this ... it was so good. i kind of wish it was a full story but i don't cause like u know what happens at the end ... still it was so good! just the right amount of fluff!