so...Setsuna/Alexiel X Kira/Lucifer?
cant wait to see Kira showing love and affection toward dear Setsuna here... XD

Thanks, with this new chapter your really made my day :)
I can't await to see how you are going to go on with the story, so please update soon!
(Btw, I'm glad to know you know how to develop a story properly ^^)

Very nice. You know, I'm almost hurt I didn't hear about this before you posted it. :(

What a lovely story!
Not only do I like the idea of Setsuna being a girl - which makes a more romantic relationship between her and Kira so much more likely; and, hell, Kira really deserves getting what he wants after all this struggling, doesn't he? - but turning the time back and turning Setsuna into a shapeshifter also has quite a lot of potential.

And then there is the storyline: Up until now, you've kept it relatively close to the original plot, but you slowly move away from it, for example by letting Setsuna/alex meet Katan etc. And you should continue with this - I dunno whether you plan on sticking to the original plot or not, but I'd suggest you shouldn't. Introduce the main characters and the whole heaven-hell-Rociel-issue, and then develop your own story. But don't retell what's happened in the mangas - Not that I think, you would really do this, but I've read Kenshin/LotR-crossovers, in which the Kenshin-crew more or less stood at the sidelines and watched the others fight over Middleearth. Such stories can be tiring for both outhor and reader.

But I guess, I myself am rather tiring right now, so I better stop lecturing someone who doesn't need it anyway, and summarize my opinion in one sentence:

If you keep this story going, which I hope you will, it can become a great epic.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter ^^

(Okay, actuaölly these were two sentences, but never mind that :p)

I'm interested in seeing how this story will develop!! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter^^

Wow that was cool, I mean since setsuna is now a girl, I wonder if sara still love him? Nice story and I hope to see more soon! Bye.