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| Yuri1245 2008-06-30 ch 14,  | abuseI really love your story and writing style! Please continue soon! |
| Kai3anime 2008-05-29 ch 14, | abuseI love this story, Gohan(the younger) is awesome I always hated how Gohan had stopped training. Anyway I can't wait for more. |
| Cloud Ex-SOLDIER 2008-05-05 ch 14, | abuseThis last chapter is by far your best. Description was a hella lot better than your previous chapters. Glad you are going more indepth with the characters and their thoughts. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| dbzfan952 2008-04-08 ch 14, anon. | abuseI'm pretty sure I've read this before, not really sure if I ever reviewed. But I just found it again, and it's brilliant! An awesome plot twist, and excellently done. I like the interaction between Mirai Gohan and Gohan, it's really interesting to see their reactions to each other. The story itself is great, not too many grammatical errors and a very well thought out plot. But with the way some things are written, it looks like it may be one of those, 'Gohan hates his father' fics. Please don't do that! But, even if you do, I suppose I will read it...This story's great, update soon, I'll be reading!! |
| I-Love-Trunks1 2008-03-27 ch 14, | abuseThat was so great! I loved it! Update soon |
| murdrax 2008-03-22 ch 14, | abusewell just caught up with all the chapters and i have to say wheat an interesting read im willing looking forward to seeing whats next!! |
| Minako Mikoto 2008-03-13 ch 14, | abuseWow that's a great story! Im anxious to see what happens next and to see Gohan's relationship with his future self. ^_^ |
| Karuma Kinsei 2008-03-11 ch 14, | abuseNice chapter long plot advancing and fun to read Only two problems: 1) Taijutsu in DBZ it is martial arts they are martial artist that's why they have world martial arts tournements. 2) Videl first human Z-fighter to shoot energy? Tien, Krillin, Chaiotzu, Yamcha, Roshi all human all energy capable. |
| SiriusRulez 2008-03-11 ch 14, | abuseThat was really good! plz post again soon |
| Guardian of Nesh 2008-03-11 ch 14, | abuseYeah Marai got what he deservered. |
| Lady Gaia 2008-03-11 ch 14, anon. | abuseGo Gohan! He kicked his weak ** future self! I really hate how weak he became. Wonder how Chichi will react when she finds out about the younger Gohan? |
| xXWinterXx 2007-12-05 ch 13, | abuseWow. It's all SO cool! ^^ I can't believe that Trunks..fainted! lol Priceless. ..Gohan is a bit cold to Mirai Gohan. I understand him though. :D I hope you get to update soon! I'm really REALLY loving your ff! |
| Karuma Kinsei 2007-11-19 ch 13, | abuseLove the story, and the way Gohan despises his future self it's entertaining. |
| Guardian of Nesh 2007-11-19 ch 13, | abuseThis is really good. |
| SiriusRulez 2007-11-19 ch 13, | abuseThat was really good! plz post again soon |