 Anthony1l 4/30/12 . chapter 5This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique. |
 forgivenshadow 3/14/12 . chapter 5Wow your a greater writer I will continue read all of your story. Hahaha ice caps. I like your style your character stay in character while remaining to they're funny deviations |
 DeathProofHero 7/22/09 . chapter 5haha! loved it. awesome ending _ |
 The Critic 6/14/09 . chapter 5 Don't mind the name.
Anyways:
First off, I would like to say, you are a great writer. You write excellently and I found very little errors, if any.
A suggestion: New Speaker, new paragraph. It was confusing at times when two characters spoke on the same line. It was easy to decipher, but it's just a suggestion. I have not read your latest stories so if you already have, my apologies.
One last thing that was just bugging me: Punk Rocket's adamantium guitar strings...not possible. Why? Teen Titans are a part of the DC universe, with Superman, Batman, and the Justice League. Adamantium is a fictional alloy in the Marvel universe, which has superheroes like Spiderman, Wolverine, Deadpool, and the X-Men.
Other than that, this was great and I will take great pleasure in reading your other stories. |
 gatita 7/27/08 . chapter 5 First off thank you for writing such a wonderful Beast Boy and Raven fanfic. I truly enjoyed the story, especially with the little background hints that give an extra touch. (JTODD Jason Todd) Also, for making Punk Rocket spout off the title and lyrics to songs. Half the fun I had while reading this was having those songs start up in my head after he said it. I think i got all five chapter titles: 1. Quiet Riot. 2.Queensryche. 3. Rolling Stones. 4. Paul McCartney and Wings. 5. Judas Priest. Actually for number 4 i assumed it was Paul McCartney since his was the original version, but it could be the cover done by Guns N Roses that you were thinking about. I love classic rock, so this story put together many a bunch of things i loved, BBxRea, SFxRob and Rock music. SO thank you for conceiving and then producing this story. |
 Juleskat101 7/18/08 . chapter 5LOL |
 Juleskat101 7/18/08 . chapter 4YAY RAVEN! WOOP! |
 Juleskat101 7/18/08 . chapter 3aww... fluffy fluff fluff |
 Juleskat101 7/18/08 . chapter 2lol polar ice caps... lmfao i laughed so hard my lungs hurt...im a funny kind of person |
 Juleskat101 7/18/08 . chapter 1HE SO DESERVED THAT! |
 Ccero 2/26/08 . chapter 5 Good one. but There is something that you shouldn't have used. The Beast.
First, I think that there was not enough emotional overload/danger/hatred to bring it. second. How its even possible that Punk Rocked, upgraded or no, could defeat or even slow it a bit?
Other than that, Nice fic. |
 bury me among the ashes 6/9/07 . chapter 5I'm sorry I didn't relize there was another chapter, that's how slow I am. You should write another story like this one that involoves Punk Rocket or Mad Mod, you write that type of personality well. I love how you make them egotrip themselves. Very well written, love the BBRae cuteness at the end. |
 bury me among the ashes 6/9/07 . chapter 4I don't understand why the story's complete, the ending...well isn't really an ending. I shall check your page for a sequel! |
 bury me among the ashes 6/9/07 . chapter 3I love the sarcasm between titans and villains, and the drama, very nice touches. |
 bury me among the ashes 6/9/07 . chapter 2There's one thing wrong with this chapter, sorry to be nitpicky.
First you had Raven putting on her cloak, when she went to see Cyborg you said she had a bathrobe on, but when she went to get into bed she had on a tank top and boxer shorts.
I loved the ending, very creative, kudos to you. |