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Reviews For: Princess of Gehenna

HLBr
2006-06-30
ch 1,
abuseHi!
I just left you a review in Beautiful People, and found this after.
Sadly, this time I have nothing not even half intelligent to say, just that is heart breaking and amazing.
In this one shot, you not only paint Narcissa and Andromeda's personalities wonderfully, but their relationship as well -this last one even better here than in BP!
I love Andromeda's descriptive way of thinking Narcissa's feelings as puzzles, her reluctance to pick up where they left it, and the fact that is made obvious that is Narcissa who needs the relationship more -even when is the other sister who is disgraced and left the family!.
Finally, very nice Tonks' cameo.
saludos
hele.
Erin
2006-06-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseBeautiful, just beautiful. I love the history you have given Narcissa; it's as complicated and pristine as she comes across in the novels. I started reading your work on the SugarQuill but was hopelessly impatient, so came over here to read the rest. You've done lovely characterisations and I just hope that you continue to write on Narcissa. It tears me up that Costos had to die, I wish that he could have lived on till somehow Malfoy died in the distant future and she could finally give up the old world and join the new. Ah, I'm a hopeless romantic. But thank you for the fantastic read.
Lady Sporkess
2006-05-06
ch 1,
abusehey great story but wasn't ted tonks a muggle born?
Harlequin Girl
2006-03-08
ch 1,
abuselove it
LadyRhiyana
2006-02-06
ch 1,
abuse"She never said what she meant". That's from 'the Ringed Castle', isn't it? Kate and Lymond. I love the cryptic undercurrents to this piece; Narcissa's fencing, Andromeda trying to figure her out and deciding it wasn't worth the effort - young Tonks had a really great cameo. I wonder what kind of impact this meeting might have had on her life.
Padfoot's Sidekick
2006-02-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseAww! I love this story! It's so bittersweet! :-)
Morganofthefairies
2006-02-04
ch 1,
abuseoh wow that was so sad...but i was in the mood for sad. I must applaud you because this is probably one of the only fics i have read where i wish that narcissa had ended up with the other guy instead of lucius, as i love lucius to bits. So that is a great achievement if i may say so myself. Wonderful stuff and i hope you write many more narcissa fics.
I am a Banana
2006-02-01
ch 1,
abuseOh wow.
Just... wow.

This was perfect. The boys on the street and little Tonks... its brilliance.

Wow.

*showers you in marshmallows*
~ Banana
Tom O'Bedlam
2006-02-01
ch 1,
abuseWow. That reeked of missed chances and tragic endings. But it was entirely fitting. I don't think your Narcissa could have married Lucius if Costos had still been alive. One sees that reading newspapers is still a dangerous activity. The pearls were a genius touch, I might add and Tonks was perfect. The interaction between Narcissa and Andromeda was facinating, too. They have such a complex relationship that you outline perfectly with just touches here and there, like the memory of Narcissa coming to Andromeda's room, and Narcissa's dolls.
Possum132
2006-02-01
ch 1,
abuseThat's good, very good. One tiny nit-pick, Ted is Muggle-born, not a Muggle.
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