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Nostalgic5947
2008-11-27 . chapter 5
KYAA!!
RyoJJ! I've noticed it too and I actually lik eit better than the two leading couples. Although, I like BerkleyJJ too (since Berkley's so much like Dee, somehow it just makes sense. 0_o)!
XD
Anyway, awesome fic!
*favs*
*alerts*
lbe
2007-01-10 . chapter 5
this is so good. i hope you finish it. it is one of the most well written pieces i've seen in a while.
ShaperOfThings
2006-11-05 . chapter 5
This is a lovely story. Very well-written, which is a rare find these days. I do wish you would update soon...
yaoinut
2006-08-01 . chapter 5
WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED YET?! YOU NEED TO UPDATE PLEASE! UPDATE!
BML Hillen-Keene
2006-05-10 . chapter 5
hey-get to the good part already! Sorry... I just want to know who's hurting JJ, as he's my fav charcter, so please hurry and update! Thanks.
D.H. Knightly
2006-02-26 . chapter 5
Are we going to see what's really going on with J.J, despite the fact it's kind of obvious?? I really want to see how Ryo deals with whomever the bastard is that's hurting J.J. - that's going to be a good fight. Ryo should play detective and/or secret agent and go find out who it is!!

Anyhow, good job with this, though Ryo's personality is a little flat, it's definitely better than some FAKE fics. :-D
kimerakeepdr
2006-02-24 . chapter 5
i had an author alert for chapter 6! but its not here! where is it? *looks around anxiously*
oh this new chapter is so hot! even though they don't actually do anything! amazing!
write some more and you can be sure i'll read it!
**kimerakeepdr**
BloodRayven
2006-02-24 . chapter 5
Hey! I LOVE IT! There aren't many Ryo x JJ out there and this one is REALLY GOOD! What in the world happened to Dee?

And who is hurting JJ?!

THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! UPDATE!
Spunky87
2006-02-20 . chapter 5
Cuddling goodness! So kawaii! Now, when is JJ. going to tell Ryo whats up? And what will everyone else think about their relationship? Hmm...please update soon!
Spunky87
2006-02-20 . chapter 4
So sad...angsty...and boy do I luv it! But now I'm really dying to know who did this to JJ.? How dare anyone hurt him? And...when will Ryo comfort him? ;) ;)
Spunky87
2006-02-20 . chapter 3
OMG, that last line is such an angsty way to end this chapter. The cuteness between these two is so addicting, maybe I need to write a Ryo x JJ. Neways, great chapter, loved to read it!
Spunky87
2006-02-20 . chapter 2
Sorry, I'm late in reviewing cause I'm lazy, lol. Great chapter, I love this story! I really liked how you showed the affection between JJ. and Drake, with Drake telling Ryo to take care of him. That was really sweet. Great writing style, nice setting description, overall, yay!
BakuraFromSchool
2006-02-14 . chapter 5
Awe man, I'm so excited to see what happens next! That chapter was cute for Valentines day... but Ugh, I'm in suspense here!
Once again. Great job, I love your style. Keep working hard, don't loose your thoughts.
~~Thankyou Again!
BFS
AeryonSun
2006-02-14 . chapter 4
I wanted to read all four chapters before I reviewed. I think this is such a well written story. I think you are doing a wonderful job on the characters and you keep them believable and real. I can't normally stand J.J., but I really love this story. I thought J.J. was all shook up over Dee. I am now curious as to who hurt J.J. You got me hooked. I look forward to more. Nice story.
BakuraFromSchool
2006-02-13 . chapter 4
I like it. It's good, I have never really THOUGHT about JJ and Ryo... but it works. I have a question thought, WHERE is Dee? What happened with him and Ryo? Are you gonna tell us? Well of course you're going to... I'm just excited for it to come quick.
~Thankyou.
BFS
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