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| StupidChinaBook 2008-05-31 ch 4,  | abusethere's been a slight mistake in the order of the tracy sons it should be Scott, John, Virgil, Gordon & Alan |
| diff-r-ent-1 2008-01-25 ch 6, | abusenice story! very nice ^_^ jeff does look mlike a huge jerk in this but still realy good! |
| epalladino 2007-11-05 ch 6, | abuseInteresting look at John and his place in the family. Thanks, Beth Palladino |
| brezo-1816 2007-07-19 ch 6, | abuseOkay I'm exhausted because I've stayed up till 2.AM reading this. Definately worth it though. I've never read a plot like this before. Brilliant story and it's definately joining my favourites list. :-) |
| zeilfanaat 2006-09-15 ch 6, | abuseWell done. Keep up the good work! |
| Boleyn 2006-09-15 ch 6, | abuseGreat story, please do an epilogue, please |
| Lillehafrue 2006-09-15 ch 6, | abuseNice wrap up. See John, you can take the man away from the rescues, but you can't take the rescue's away from the man. Nice job. Jeff, what an idiot you can be sometimes. Scoot, even though I agree it was probably the right thing to do at the time, you shouldn't smack your father. He could hit back. Glad things turned out for the best! |
| zeilfanaat 2006-08-18 ch 5, | abuseFabulous chapter! I hope you're ok. Good luck with everything! |
| Sam1 2006-08-05 ch 5, | abuseKate, that was an excellent update. So much detail to the emotions and thoughts of all of the Tracys. A wonderful bit of writing. Adding this story to my alert list. Great job!! |
| Lillehafrue 2006-08-05 ch 5, | abuseVery nice chap. You caught the emotions of everyone brilliantly. I especially liked the letters to each of them. Jeff's was harsh, but it deserved to be. And I was glad to see that John didn't just cave in, when his father came to visit in London. So, what convention is John going to in Vegas huh?? And can I come? And by the way...loved the name of the jet. |
| Boleyn 2006-08-05 ch 5, | abuseI hope you are okay, great chap, please let John go back when he's sorted everything out. |
| zeilfanaat 2006-06-26 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter! Please update soon! |
| Prinzessin 2006-06-26 ch 4, | abuseOh, good chapter! Poor John, 'specially at the end...wonder what's gonna happen now? |
| cip 2006-06-25 ch 4, | abusepowerful stuff! please keep going, I must know what happens! |
| Lillehafrue 2006-06-25 ch 4, | abuseAt last, the long awaited confrontation between Jeff and his children. I have a feeling things are going to get a bit ugly. There will be words that will be hard to say, and even harder to hear...on both sides. Hope they come through it all intact. |