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| Shayleatone 2008-08-29 ch 20, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this and I can not help but start the next one. Nice job. |
| Baitdcat 2008-04-15 ch 10, | abusei like it too!! although it is a far stretch and so OOC for sessh's character i loved it.. |
| Ai Koden 2007-12-30 ch 20, | abuseah you ended it just there!! a complete story cliffy. well thats ok since you have a sequel. AWESOME story!! i really liked it alot. i hope the next sequel has more sesshomaru and sango in it :D |
| . ∙ : ∙ . ¤ 2007-05-27 ch 20, anon. | abusethis story for the win! ♪ i really like this. the sequel is great, i'm sure! i'll check it out really soon. tactics of revenge, right? ♥ thanks for the great read! |
| HELEN HODOAN 2007-03-04 ch 20, anon. | abuseTHAT IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL! |
| Tohru-chan 2007-02-11 ch 19, anon. | abuseI loved the dragons in your story! That's so cool! |
| zeurin 2007-02-09 ch 20, | abuseOk, so I was reading the sequel to this but it didn't make much sense, so I came back and read this one... As much as I hate to admit it, this one was much better than the sequel, sorry. In ToD, you could see the slow forming love betweem Sango and Sesshomaru and I really liked it. I dunno the second one was a bit too fast. Miroku dies, Sango and Sesshou become mates, Sango gets raped, She has two kids, Inuyasha dies, Kagome gets old, and her son runs away. Kinda rushed, ya know? Sorry this is so long... -zeurin |
| jake 2006-12-25 ch 7, anon. | abusewhat about totosai? |
| FirstStarISeeTonight 2006-11-01 ch 20, | abuseThat was awesome! But I have to confess that I kinda got bored at the MirSan. XP Poor Sessy. :( I was really thinking how you'd untagle the whole love triangle thing and at the end.. thanks to Miroku's uncontrolable urge to cheat (even though how much he loves Sango), there'll be a chance for Sessy and Sango! Woot! And for writing such a great story, to my Favorites this one goes! :D |
| CrazyCamealion 2006-09-07 ch 8, anon. | abuseYay! I knew I was RIGHTO! Well, of ourse you did name it the game of deception. Oh wait. is Kyo gonna try and twist it around to make them think that Seshomaru is Tohyama?? I must read and find out!! |
| CrazyCamealion 2006-09-07 ch 6, anon. | abuseWow!! That was trully horriffic! But why am I sill suspicious of Kyo?? Is it just because your writing these lovely little cues in to what I'm contemplating he actually is? Must read on and find out if I'm right!! Oh and I love how you are using all the charcters and not just focuding on one or two!! So many writers forget about who they are discussing and then sometimes cut out a main charcter completely from the plot. I absoluteley LOVE that your not doing that! |
| CrazyCamealion 2006-09-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseWell! I am submitting to your request by submitting a review!! And I love your work! I'm curious to see how you will pair up Sango and Sheshomaru. This should be entertaining. And I've really like it so far. Your going at a very nice pace. too many times it's rushed. And that doesn't bode well for character developement or for a very convincing and good story. So Keep it up!! I can't wait to see what other fanfics you have written! |
| moongrace 2006-08-22 ch 5, | abuseomg, omg, omg,omg seshy-babey protect sango let him be possesive let him be possesvie omg i adore this fic,awesome i luv the last,last part |
| me 2006-08-20 ch 9, anon. | abusesangos dead that suxx. and sessh was pissed lol.. but i see that teh next chappie is called 'resurrection' so i'm not worried cuz sessh is gonna bring sango back rite, foo'? okay well seeya |
| me 2006-08-20 ch 8, anon. | abusedun dun dun!1 yea that was scarey but i knew that kyo was tohyama foo'! and teh parts with jakken in it were funny.. I PITY DA FOO'! |