I could kiss you! (In the spirit of philos, naturally:)
I am so sick and tired of the myriad perversions paraded before the unwary in their quest for a good story.

A great story. Very good.

This story was absolutely hilarious! Honestly, I don't know where the crazy shippers (or Neil Gaiman, for that matter) get these insane ideas, but it is so nice to see someone give them all the rounded mocking they deserve.

And now I can imagine weird shippers being beaten up by Corin, and that will certainly help keep the dismay at bay. ;) Brilliant job.

Oh this is hilarioulsy funny, I adore this story. I love this part, "As he laughed, Rasheed saw out of the corner of his eye that one of the nomads made a move to get up, but the man sitting next to him put a hand on his arm to stop him." I was squealing with delight at that point and my eyeballs picked up speed as I digest the rest of this amazing story.

I laughed so hard at the end because it's so true. The crazy pairings out there are just insane and I applaud you for writing a clever work of art addressing this issue.

Thanks again,
Rolletti

I like this one just as much as the other one. XD


The last line before the _ was the best.

Very interesting.

I wish someone would hammer the 'different types of love' idea into some people's heads.

Nice story.

Ok. That was funny. Leastways the judgment rendered was. I can definatly see Corin dealing out justice in that manner. And, aye, Peter's statement at the end is ever so true. If one knows not Aslan, by another name true, how can one ever begin to see the Truth?

Well done.

Totally fantastic. This was a hilarious read that put a humorous spin on all the strange out-of-canon pairings out in fandom, and very tasteful disagreement with wacked-out incest and interspecies relationships.

Your writing is very charming and engaging, and the plot was well thought out. The dialogue flows smoothly and the whole story made me laugh. Kudos for a awesome job!

“This Aslan, then, is he a magician? Somewhere I heard that he once loved a sorceress who kept the North under a spell of winter.”

I feel so incuded!^^ Very nice bit of subtle Jadis/Aslan bashing, I must say! The whole story is great fun, especially the end! Well done.

~Doc, the Shameless Jadis/Aslan shipper

:)

i like it!

If this is a poke at some of the tripe that is out there, then YEA for you. 'Twas ver funny and touching at the same time. A look back at the face of those who write such stuff. If not, it sure could have been...

Wow, what a perfect story. I love your technique. I also thought it was funny and clever. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Peter by the gift Aslan, by election, by prescription, and by conquest, High King over all Kings in Narnia, Emperor of the Lone Islands and Lord of Cair Paravel, Knight of the Most Noble Order of the Lion, To the Lady San Antonio Rose, Greeting.

It has come to our attention that you are one of they few who display proper knowledge of us and are habits in our realm of Narnia. We also wish to express our happiness and you descriptions and portrayals of us in your most exhalent tale. We urge you to continue to write stories of our time in Narnia and beyond as tales with this quality are few and far between.

Further more we thank you for having read the Chronicles that were set down by C. S. Lewis and for following then faithfully. If ever you find yourself in Aslan’s Country we urge to pay all of us a visit that we may further show our pleasure in you writing.

-Peter, High King

Aw. Stumbled on this. Very...concise, and well-written, much in the style of Lewis. It made me smile. :)

Even if I am a Pevensiecest fan. xD But anything is good with me.