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| Miss-Monster-Kimono 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was so freaking hilarious! Little Shino is adorable. Poor Shibi...stalker! LOL! XD That was cute. Please continue to write. Miss-Monster-Kimono |
| oreostar90 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseaww, I don't blame bug users for fearing or 'disliking' dogs, my dog loves to eat any bug that flys/crawls/moves past her eyes. |
| HinataMorningstar 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuselovly!! |
| Ao Ame 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseahahahaa XD nice one dude! |
| CantarellaKisses 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseLittle Shino is so cute! It makes me want a Shino plushi I can squeeze. I thought the setting was adorable and the way you portrayed Shibi and Aoi was wonderful. And I thought it was hilarious that she kept refusing. |
| TakeTenEyes 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseso cute! totally adding this to my faves, wee! ^_^ |
| Kitty Harasser 2007-02-01 ch 1, | abuseOh this is going on my favorites! I so love it. Do you think you might update? For me? |
| Artemis 85 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abusetalk about rein carnations! AYE! lol kewl fic! |
| ChaosleaderofallthatisantiT... 2006-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseAAW... That was so cute. I read this yesterday and decided to leave a review... I love Shino. Hes so cool, and I like how you thought about this background of how his parents met. Very nicely written, but Shino seemed a little out of character at the end when he was telling them who his teamates were... Aw well. nobody can be perfect. Very nice story though...I almost died laughing in my head... I don't laugh out loud much at reading materiel anymore.. not after that INCIDENT in class... keep up the good work! |
| Illusions Industry 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abuseAw adorable ^^. I want to be part of the Aburame clan ^^. Even if I'm scared to death of bugs lol :p. |
| blackrose113 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseLol! I love Shino. He is by far my favorite character. Er, my favorite favorite character. This was a great story, though there was one part that confused me: “I’ll never forget Tsume’s face when we walked back into town and you were wearing them either. I hope you write more Shino goodness! |
| RkRshinobi 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuse:D I LOVED IT!! It was so good. :D :D :D I loved the ending: "Isn't that nice," Aoi said far too cheerfully. "He's teamed up with Tsume's son." Shibi stood silent. XD Great job. I really like how you portrayed his parents and how they met. (heheh, Shibi's a stalker) :D This is going on my favorites list. :D |
| Lithe-Fider 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseSo adorable... X3 It's always nice to see a fic where Shino and his family are portrayed as caring, normal people who also happen to have kikai bugs living inside them. So awesome. I also like your version of Shino’s mom. ^^ She reminds me of my version of her, except I have her as a bug user (she married into the clan and took on the challenge of getting kikai bugs as an adult). However, it’s true most people see her as a non-bug-user the way you did. Which is also fine, everyone has their own interpretations of stuff, that’s the beauty of fan fiction! ^^ Much love to the Aburame’s, keep up the good work! |
| Stellar.Star103 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI loved it ! They really shouldh hav more stories about Shino's childhood an parents! I've always thought tht Shino's mom wouldn't have the kikai..otherwise it'd b lik marryin frm the same clan...ew. Btw, ur chibi Shino is ADORABLE! He's so cute...n i love how u said tht Shibi was a stalker...he acted quite lik it. But he sure was determined. I bet he must've liked Aoi alot...but u didn't really go desciptive about their dates. Lol, Aoi had bug spray wid her! Also, wen u said Aoi foind kikai in strange places, was tht wht she meant as lecherous?? ^^ Tsume was tuff as well, her tryin to get Aoi to marri her bother. I lov how Aoi wouldnt marri Shibi unless he gave her the shades. i also love SHino's eye ^^ ^^ Uber nice story, please rit mor in the future! |
| Syngamy 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseVery cute :D I like that you wrote about Shino's parents XD |