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Hikaru Abridged
2008-06-11
ch 8,
abuselol XDD

i find this story quite funny iy definitly satifies my sense of humor =]

what amazes me is that you have this ability to make the charecters so ooc but yet manage to keep them in charecter at the same time...get what ijm saying XD
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well this is very funny so far
- the fantsy to it with there being aliens and mew mews this sorta reminds me of azumanga daioh

i dont know if youv ever seen it but its an anime about 6 friends and their high school years and its very realistic -the situations and all...not thje peoples- and very funny so im very off topic...keep up the good work and update soon or youll get a V.I.P your of my fun fun underground torcher room O_^

-hika-chan
Ally Marton
2008-06-07
ch 8,
abuseHa! OH man, poor Taruto! I wonder how Pudding's siblings are doing right then (?). Pai and Lettuce are so cUTE! I feel immense saddness that there's not another chapter up for me to read, but I'll survive (like always). I sincerely hope you work on your story soon! I know its not original, but I think you mentioned before about people giving ideas, and it'd be funny if Ichigo and Kish joined forces to bring them closer together (I'm not a IxK fan, but those two together can be synical!)
Ally Marton
2008-06-07
ch 6,
abuseI can't laugh enough about that last part. Pity they din't get to the computer, but at least Pudding got the black-mail, right? Very cute chapter, look forward to the next!
Ally Marton
2008-06-07
ch 5,
abuseWell, it would have been amking it move too fast but... DARN! Why didn't he ask her out?! The way you portray Pudding frightens me, but in the 'I'm not going to stop reading for anything' kinda way. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I ADORE reading it. So how will you create a castastrophe with a computer in the next chapter...? :da da DUH, cliffhanger:
Ally Marton
2008-06-07
ch 4,
abuseDespite the fact that its not serious, its probably good for all of those (and parcially me) addicted readers who read all day and write all night. I think you prtrayed it all very well in this chapter, and I'm very much enjoying what I'm reading. Poor Lettuce, now she has to deal with two abnormal beings in her household! I look forward to reading the next one!
Ally Marton
2008-06-07
ch 3,
abuseMuwahhaha! And the uncomfortable relationship continues! :laughs like a maniac at the comedy taking place before her computer screen: Phew! Glad that's out of the way. I really liked the part where Pai here's her coming and tries to act nonchalant (then naturally tips over the cereal bowl). Oh, I was kind of confused by the part where he didn't know she was going out with Shirogane but seemed to have already insinuated that by when Lettuce had kissed him.
Ally Marton
2008-06-07
ch 2,
abuseWow, didn't know Lettuce had it in her to punch anyone (strangle maybe, but punch?). Ha! Kish and Taruto playing go fish, I can see it now! K, next chapter!
Ally Marton
2008-06-07
ch 1,
abuseGo PaixLettuce! Hm, well, it appears written decently and has humor in it, so I'll go on ahead and get started on the next chapter! (BTW, I liked the part where Pai 'fell into a choking fit' heh heh...)
Angel Ichigo Melody
2008-05-14
ch 8,
abuseOk... creepy
Dragon-Griot-209
2008-03-11
ch 8,
abuseThis story is so adorable! please post up more chapters!
zenagaserpent
2008-02-27
ch 8,
abuseOkay, my mind is blown away from the huge amount of fluff, so...

Poor Taruto. xD
intricate designs
2008-02-26
ch 8,
abuseI love it! So much fluff. Awesome! I love the ending.
Zeak the Echidna
2008-02-26
ch 8,
abuseThat was really cute! X3
Poor Taruto! Hehe!
I didn't realize that you changed your username.
Hope to see more.
Mew-Sahara
2008-02-26
ch 8,
abuse"I think I killed it."

That line KILLED me. It was so great, I thought I was going to die laughing.

Aww, Pai's turned into a softie! Even his brain a bit, with the whole, "You can sleep with me." bit. *laughs*

I'm so happy you updated, and it was a fabulous chapter. Kya, it was awesome~!
YusukiShredder
2008-02-25
ch 8,
abuseWow...
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PLEASE DO MORE! ITS SO COOL AND CUTE! YES, THE CUTNESS!
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