Hi! I've finally got the time to sit down to review your story. So here goes!

I noticed a lot of minor mistakes regarding tenses (past and present mainly), but this happens in almost every story. I think you picked an interesting way to end their relationship and I think you really captured how Usagi would have reacted.

I was a little surprised when it said in the letter that Mamoru was going to Canada. That seemed a little out of left field, but as side from that everything was good. I will say, I liked 'Walk away' better though.

I look forward to seeing the final story in your trilogy and how Chibi-Usa comes to be. Until then, bye!

I just read both of these stories today. They're very good, though you have spelling mistakes here and there, they're just minor but it would make your story much better if you tried correcting them. :) But I liked this one. It was very good, it had the emotion it needed and everthing, especially in the letter.

I can't wait to read your next fic.

This is such a great fic please update soon.

I really liked it :). By the way, just a question about the other review to whomever wrote it. The truth according to whom exactly? You don't like yuri, don't review. Plus, ya know its call FANfiction for a reason right? O-o

i read this one and the prequel to it, and found both brilliant, i love them and cant wait to see easier to run up! sounds good
ciao, sayanara! lol
T aka sailorstars16!

I'm curious to know who Mamoru was with. Will that be addressed in your next story?

i dont mean to be this mean but usagi/rei
just dont belong together. mamoru and usagi do. it seems like all you people like is yuri
stories there sickning to me and its a sin
also.like i said i didnt mean this review to
be mean all it is the honest truth.