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This is xoxoparadox
2008-08-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseI think this might be one of my favorites from you, aside from Winning Kenji, Midday Dinner Discord, Rain, and Hide and Seek. x) Great story as always. It was a fun read.

Please add more stories when you have time, I'd love to read them.
iheartkenji
2007-07-25
ch 1,
abuseWHY DO I KEEP SQEALING? I'TS UN NATURAL! Ops... sorry...
Anonymous but very interest...
2006-07-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is the first time I've read this story. It's wonderful. Very sweet. Kenji was cute...Kenshin and Kaoru must feel so blessed to have a child like him. And the interaction between Kenshin and Kaoru was nicely done, too. =)

Thanks for sharing this with us all!

Good luck.

^_^
akisu-san
2006-07-10
ch 1,
abuseaww, that's so adorable! I love reading about Kenshin and Kenji-honestly, I really don't like it when Kenji feels resentment towards his father, and I agree with you completely regarding the second OVA. Please keep writing! ^-^
Sarah Bowie
2006-05-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseYour stories are quite enchanting. They are all simple yet so profound and very endearing. I do agree with your complaints regarding OAV2. I dislike not-so-happy endings. Hope you write more stories like this one.
Kenshin's Soul
2006-03-04
ch 1,
abuseOne word: kawai!

I love anything that has Kenshin and Kenji. They're an awesome pair.

Ah, the term 'itadakimasu' means thank you for the food.

I'm gonna fave this one. Yup! Yup!

Beautifully written. *nodding*
Kaizoku_ou
2006-02-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseO.o oh! how incredibly sweet! I loved it
skenshingumi
2006-02-15
ch 1,
abuseThis was a really nicely done slice of life for the Himura family. The pacing felt very natural, there was downplayed drama without being melodramatic and very natural exchanges between husband and wife and father and son. I love how Kenji's curiosity, playfulness and fears all come through at different points. I am also glad that you continued the story with a very caring exchange between Kenshin and Kaoru without being overly erotic. After almost freezing to death, I would imagine that Kenshin would just want to relax and soak up the message. It was nice to see Kaoru have such mature and toned down reactions here as she tryies to keep Kenji calm while doing all she can for Kenshin.
Summoner Lenne10
2006-02-04
ch 1,
abuseOh, wow!

I read this fic and loved it entirely.

Then I checked to see what else you had written- hey, it's you hun!

*Hugs*

Hi! Lmao.

Great fic ^_^, I loved it.

Now I'm off to go check on the forums again, lmao.
MysticFirefly
2006-02-04
ch 1,
abuseThat was a very sweet little fic. I love the fact that you paid attention to minor details. Like how nothing stops little kids and how they are always curious. I really got that father-son relationship. Awesome job.
R.K.R.
2006-02-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseaw... that was great! :]
moeru himura
2006-02-03
ch 1,
abuseOh, cute and sweet. I love fics on Father-Son rel'ship. That white rabbit is a really good idea. And Kenji was so cute when he thought Kenshin's dead! Lol. I'm not supposed to laugh at it, but his innocence... it's relieving, that's why I can laugh abt it. Good job! Finally, you were able to pull off a sweet Kenshin-Kenji fic!:P
RK Otaku
2006-02-02
ch 1,
abuseGreat fic. I really like the way you've staged the interaction between father & son. There are so few ficsbased on Kenji's childhood, so it was a great read. The captured innocence... Kenshin has been shown in a new light- not one of the guilt striken hitokiri, nor the clueless rurouni but as a common husband & father..

Pleases keep writing. Until next time..
charmed-sword
2006-02-02
ch 1,
abuseThis was such a cute and sweet story. I enjoyed it very much. Cute Kenji's antics, lol when he wanted to drink the snow...^_^ And then how Kenshin explained the white rabbit, and how Kenji helped him, aw.. cuteness between Kenshin and Kaoru too. ::grin::

Loved it! You gotta write more! ...Kay? :)
Hikari Himura
2006-02-02
ch 1,
abuseThat was a cut fic, I liked a lot. You are very good at this, I hope to see more fics like this.
See ya and take care
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