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brilliant

This story made me cry so hard. It was wonderful.

I liked this. The writing itself was a little strange, but it was totally clear and easy to read. I love the execution of the plot. It didn't seem like anything happened except for the shifts in Sakura's mood, but I was so engrossed. I love fics like that--the ones that grip you and you can't put your finger on why.

Since your a translator, how about translating your favorite Japanese fics?

Wonderful story Nes Mikel. I teared up at the end, it took alot of will power to keep them at bay too. I envy the way you made it all fit together. Ten stars and all thumbs up for you!!
Good luck with any and all future stories!

That was quite possible the saddest Naruto fanfic I have ever read! The imagery and the sheer emotions that came through were just beautiful and really came through! Thank you so much for writing this.

It is a terrible thing to live forever. It is even worse that one should drift into insanity, and never realize the Hell they live in.

beautiful, absolutly beautiful, as i write this i'm close to tears, amazing story, deeply touching

ah so sad

YOu are great. I were able to see the story happening, instead of just reading it.

what the heck?? you know i read this story literally 3 years ago and always wanted to review, and i just know found it again! oh my god man i do not posses the vocabulary needed to describe how amazing this story is/was. seriously man i'm ashamed i never reviewed before, and i'm actually sorry.


wow, simply astonishing story.

tears just came out when I read the last part, :[
it was just so beautiful and breathtaking.

I love you and this story. ;]]

Ok, so I don't cry for just about anything, and I can barely write this review do to the tears in my eyes...I LOVED IT! It was so beautiful, and so brilliant. I mean, I can't believe this was just a thought that you wrote in five hours, it is so genius. I mean, did you have the time-passing part planned out from the beginning? Or did you just suddenly add that? Whatever you did, this is one of the best stories I have ever read, especially when it comes to Naruto and Sakura fictions, this one was so beautiful. I am on my way now to go read the companion and the sequal, and you can expect lengthy reviews when I finish those.

Oh god, I loved it so much, and now I can't get it out of my head. It was so captivating, so touching, so BRILLIANT! AND BEAUTIFUL!

I have gotten into repeating myself, so I will cut this off. You are one amazing writer, it was such an original idea, so beautiful and heatwarming and heartbreaking and everything, time to go actually cry now...

Bye...
Annabelinda

So heartbreaking. So beautifully, heartbreakingly written. I don't think any other story even comes close to this story's enrapturing pain and tragedy. Wow, I'm just...so moved right now I can't even begin to explain...
I had actually opened up Medusa Javelin a few days ago, but never got down to reading it. I'm going to start now, so I guess I had better be prepared for more heartache, right?
Again, a phenomenal piece of work.

At first I was confused what rift it was all about, but as I read through the piece it made sense that Naruto was almost not aging.

The tears just kept flowing after reading this story. I have read a lot of stories but surely this is one of my personal favorites. I am touched in a way I couldn't believe I would be touched. Like Sakura in the story, I have been into a battle that already ripped me apart. That, maybe, had been the reason for the pain I've felt near the end. I'm a little envious though, she had been able to live in both worlds even if it caused her great pain, it had also caused her great joy.

Well, enough of my ramblings.

I just seem to be really overwhelmed by this story (I am not speaking coherently anymore) that I'm sure to find the other two related to this.

I really like the story that's why I don't think it is just half-decent. I'm sorry if I differ in your opinion on that, but I hope you continue writing stories as touching as this.

-erika