|Reviews for Little Piece of Heaven|
| Poppy Young 5/22/13 . chapter 26
This was really nice 3
| Crimson Eyed Sakura 5/21/13 . chapter 26
Well, that was really good.
I'm an avid Ita-Saku fan, so it was a bit difficult to tell myself to see what else is out there and read a Sasu-Saku. But I am glad I did. This was awesome. :)
| Fozzie99 5/20/13 . chapter 26
Awesome story I loved it! Great job :)
| Arcadian Helix 5/15/13 . chapter 13
I love how Kakashi is all pissy about him being late XD I bet he barely made it there before Sasuke showed up XP
| Arcadian Helix 5/15/13 . chapter 8
She opened an eye slightly, absorbing the soft blur or (of) black and orange infront of her.
| Arcadian Helix 5/15/13 . chapter 7
Just your friendly spell checker :D I do this because as a dabbler in the arts of writing (albeit far less skilled), and a dedicate reader, I too would want any mistake pointed out, small or large! I really do love the story so far! Your awesome, and I love how satire the over all theme is! Makes me laugh :D
Sasuke was suddenly out galabandting without a reason that 'mattered'…? Dumbass.
| Arcadian Helix 5/15/13 . chapter 2
Just thought I'd point out the small spelling error :) I like the story so far! I'm not sure if you check on this one much or if you write anymore, but your very talented! I really like what you did with Sakura's personality :) Off to read more!
Sakura blinked rapidly trying to tare herself from the previous situation with Neji. "Y-you're leaving already?"
| els1324 5/13/13 . chapter 26
Well instead of studying for my finals I decided to read this. At the start of each new chapter I was like, "I'll go study after this one..." BUT I COULDN'T. I HAD TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED NEXT! DAMN YOU! *shakes fist*
Haha, it was really good though, I loved it! I don't regret reading it for now (I will tomorrow during my exam though...Gah!)
| Akahanae 5/11/13 . chapter 26
*Claps* This is amazing even thought it is 2013 May. LITTLE PIECE OF HEAVEN
| TheStaticAge 5/3/13 . chapter 9
Lol Sasuke, you just wanna hog Sakura all to your self. XD
| TheStaticAge 5/3/13 . chapter 2
Yay! A lil' NejiSaku and LeeSaku! I also hate it when people rush with it, like one day Sasuke and Sakura hate each other, the next they're making out, the next the have a kid. Ugh.
| TheStaticAge 5/3/13 . chapter 1
I'm not really into SasuSaku, but this is DANG GOOD! I HATE IT, when in SasuSaku fics where Sakura hadn't changed at all and she's all "I WANT TO BE YOUR BABY FACTOR SASUKE-KUN!". I will ONLY read a SasuSaku fic IF Sakura still has her ass kicking abilities and confidence. Totally love this! :)
| Sara 5/1/13 . chapter 26
It's very well written. No doubt, you're a fine writer.
I enjoyed the story a lot, but in my opinion Sasuke is a bit too demanding and forceful. Personally, I’d be puzzled if someone didn’t want to talk about our romantic relationship, but still insisted on me moving in. And always doubting her skills and following should probably make her angrier. Actually, if my boyfriend acted the same was as Sasuke acts towards Sakura, we would have to have a Very Serious Talk.
But then again, I still liked the story very much. I will probably read this again (:
| Langa 4/18/13 . chapter 2
Where have you been all my life? I've been looking for a story like this for a long time. You're an awesome writer and I can't wait to read more of your work. I totally agree with you with EVERYTHING, I can tell that your characters won't be OOC. PS I hated Sakura too, she was PATHETIC!
| JinnySkeans 4/15/13 . chapter 26
Just wanted to thank you for this story.
It was absolutely beautiful.
You didn't need to resort to the gratuitous sexuality that so many writers use to try and bump their review count, and instead relied on the story itself, which was good enough to stand on its own merits. You kept every single character in character at the same time, and you took your time with the pacing. Sasuke and Sakura are the kind of couple to have a long, drawn-out love story where nothing comes easy at first, because they're such opposites personality-wise and so much has happened between them that will make a relationship really difficult at first. You have to address the subject of them as friends first, and then have Sasuke make an actual effort, both of which you pulled off seamlessly.
I liked the edits you added as well, it shows that you care about the quality of your work even years later to have the inclination to polish things up again. I thought what you added/changed only enhanced the quality of this story, i.e. the expansion of the scene where Sakura is confronted in the woods on the way home from her mission.
I also loved how you didn't let Sasuke get away with anything, even up until the end; he fucked up, truly, almost start to finish, but his feelings for Sakura were genuine, and she was able to see that in the end. But even knowing all that, it wasn't some grandiose, overblown "I love you and we'll always be together and there won't be any problems." It was realistic. It was a start that you left them off with, and there's the implication that there's still a lot to be handled between the two of them. She doesn't quite trust him yet (nor should she) and neither one of them are especially ready for the emotional ramifications of being together, so there's bound to be a struggle after this. And that's beautiful, because the best relationships are forged from a strong emotional connection, and that's what Sasuke and Sakura are in the process of working on at the end of the story. So much of their interaction is implied, which is exactly true to canon. I LOVE that.
Not sure why you've been getting so much hate about the end, but do me a solid and ignore it, and be proud of this story. It's gorgeous, start to finish. You're an excellent writer, and thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us. It was amazing and I loved every minute of it. :)
xoxo Daisy :)