Beautiful and believable ending. I love the way you used the line breaks to create a different rhythm when they rolled down the sand dune.

Even though you don't seem to be active on the fan fiction website anymore, I hope you are still writing. You have a lot of talent.

You were really ahead of your time with this story (Tank considering cats as pets, Rangeman insignia on Steph's underwear, Steph swearing off men - all ideas that ended up in later books).

Your writing is excellent and very reminiscent of the actual books.

This was a very touching chapter. I love how you pointed out the irony of Joe & Steph switching positions in their opinions of domestic life. I think you really captured Joe's character and didn't make him out to be a bad guy. I also like that fact that you tied in Grandma Mazur's wild behavior to her not being allowed to fly when she was younger and married.

Good chapter - much food for thought.

I read your other JE story and really liked it, so I just started reading this one. I really like your style of writing. I like your Stephanie. She is strong, but I feel she is still true to the character in the books. Of course, I've read #15, where she swore off men. You wrote this story years before that book. I really like your analysis of their communication issues - the fact that she sees everything Ranger says or does through the filter she developed after their horrible "morning after" conversation. You are very insightful.

Oh my god! i read this in between reading 12 and 13 and i had to re read 12 because i couldn't remember what had happened. Your story was so good! like Janet good!! That was amazing!

I'm sorry that I hadn't reviewed before now, but I just kept reading and reading and reading!!

I really enjoyed this, and was BUSTING to find out what had been planned for Rangeday as badly as the MM.

I love when the MM are broken down into clear individuals with history and personality. I think you did them all justice. Throwing Vin Diesel in there to think about too was nice :)

The development of the different relationships was believable and even though some characters were slightly OOC, I believe that was only because you allowed them a chance to develop and grow with the story.

I know this is a really old story but I just wanted to express my thanks and enjoyment from you writing it.

One last thing?

Where can I see the pictures that Tsuy took of the MM at Rangeday :)

great story i really liked it

AWESOME story! I loved it! :)

Great story! I love your version of Stephanie, I love that she's not completely helpless. I would love to read more stories from you when you get the inspiration. I also loved all the interaction you had in the story with the Merry Men and how you incorporated Michael. I agree that he would make a very fitting Rangeman employee.

Fantastic, fun story! I was VERY sad to see it end! :(

Wow! I loved how you handled the breakup with Ram talking to her and how Joe and her had a talk. Great writing!

OMG! I couldn't stop to write a review until I was finished with the entire story. What an incredible talent you are. This premise was wonderful, and I loved the way you developed the emotion and directed the plot. I could see the entire story unfold in my eyes as you wrote it.

The emotional scenes between Steph & Ranger, AND between Tsuy and Tank were so well written. I loved the way they grew and matured with the story. The way they (especially Steph) came to awareness of their feelings and need to express them was so true to life. I read the RangeDay EXTRA between the chapters as noted, and it filled in all the blanks that are usually left out of a story. What a fantastic idea.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your work. Keep up the excellent writing.
Mag

amazing I loved it! :)
it was funny and serious at the same time.
I like your Michael character too. is there/ or will there be a sequel?

I would LOVE to see a sequel to this? Maybe a "Next Year's Rangeday!"

Or perhaps...I could write a sequel to this?

With...JAMIE planning everything? (if you aren't familiar with my stories, Jamie is Stephanie's little sister...and kind of crazy. But we love her)

absolutly loved it.