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Vulcan Rider
2008-07-19
ch 22,
abuseOMG! I couldn't stop to write a review until I was finished with the entire story. What an incredible talent you are. This premise was wonderful, and I loved the way you developed the emotion and directed the plot. I could see the entire story unfold in my eyes as you wrote it.

The emotional scenes between Steph & Ranger, AND between Tsuy and Tank were so well written. I loved the way they grew and matured with the story. The way they (especially Steph) came to awareness of their feelings and need to express them was so true to life. I read the RangeDay EXTRA between the chapters as noted, and it filled in all the blanks that are usually left out of a story. What a fantastic idea.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your work. Keep up the excellent writing.
Mag
victorianvamp105
2008-07-01
ch 22,
abuseamazing I loved it! :)
it was funny and serious at the same time.
I like your Michael character too. is there/ or will there be a sequel?
Bowlingforshrimp
2008-05-31
ch 22,
abuseI would LOVE to see a sequel to this? Maybe a "Next Year's Rangeday!"

Or perhaps...I could write a sequel to this?

With...JAMIE planning everything? (if you aren't familiar with my stories, Jamie is Stephanie's little sister...and kind of crazy. But we love her)
x3myheartbeat
2008-02-04
ch 22,
abuseabsolutly loved it.
glc
2007-12-07
ch 22,
abuseHi There,
Was linked to this story by someone's recommendation and it did not disappoint. Have just read through the entire thing in one setting - it was very enjoyable.

Loved Tsuy, she was a very interesting counterpoint to Steph's engery. Thought you did a great job fleshing out the many merry men.

Thanks for posting really liked this
Svendances
2007-11-24
ch 22,
abuseI read it in one sitting, which is a great feat for me, and I'd just like to commend you on this fantabulous display and ask you one simple question: What the hell are you doing writing fanfiction? You should be out there writing actual novels!! You have an awesome talent and I say it's time you shared it with the entire world... not just the Plumfanatic world. No pressure. Once again I LOVED it.
findinggonzo
2007-11-13
ch 22,
abuseHey wow, this story was amazing. Really really good. Nice job!
Kate Manoso
2007-10-12
ch 22,
abuseI just sat here and read this story in one day. My eyes are killing me and I have a major headache. But I just have to say... WOW! This was a great story!

Kate
a lurker
2007-09-12
ch 22, anon.
abusethat was wonderful!! the timing was great and the characters dead-on. thank you for what must have been hard work.
Silly Smiles
2007-07-05
ch 22,
abuseThis story really surprised me. I haven't really seen any fanfiction lately that has captured my interest so well. You're writing style is great and I loved the whole plot of this fic! I can seriously see this happening between Ranger. Some of the characters were a little OOC but not so totally that it ruined the mood. Great work ;-)
She'sGotHighHopes
2007-06-26
ch 22,
abuseWow. It's 7 in the morning and I should have gone to bed by midnight. I couldn't stop reading this story. I love that Steph learned to take care of herself and waited on Ranger until she was ready. I'm so glad that Ranger opened up to her, even though he couldn't tell her everything. I love your writing style. Everything about this story was incredible.
b-baller5036
2007-06-13
ch 22,
abuseOk good story, it's going on my favorite stories list.
I would write something more eloquent and longer, but it's 5:22 AM right now, so this is all I can think of to write.
Sorry for the crappy review
hotcouplefan
2007-05-14
ch 22,
abuseThis story and the accompanying EXTRA were totally awesome. I love how you handled the reconfiguring of Steph and Ranger's relationship and the blossoming one with Thomas and Tsuey. I was particularly impressed with Ranger finding just the right teacher for Stephanie's personal growth. He saw what she needed and provided it to her in just the right way. Also the interaction between all the team members with Steph and with each other made it all come together.
I really loved Ranger waking up Stephanie to enjoy the sunrise with him and using that time to discuss their future together.
Finally, Ranger: totally, totally awesome. You have taken him where he should be going. Steph also.

Thanks for a wonderful story. I hated to see it end.
columbogus
2007-02-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseI just finished RangeDay and Range Day extra and It was a dark and stormy night. Wow. I loved all of them! Thank you so much for such great stories. And now I see you also do firefly. COOL! Thanks again for a great read.
gerdieSI
2007-01-16
ch 22,
abuseGreat Story...I loved how Steph pulled off the whole Rangeday thing without any of the guys knowing...now I want to try that Beach sailing thing, that sounds like fun...thanks for a great read while I'm waiting for the next book.
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