Reviews for The Unburdening

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happyharper13 2008-08-11 ch 9,	abuseWill you update this story at some point? The writing is amazing, and I really want to find out what happens next.
eleen 2007-08-08 ch 9,	abuseDid you abandon this? To bad, it was really good. I was so happy to finally find a fic where Sara gave Grissom a piece of her mind.
Dr.Kevorkian 2007-07-18 ch 9,	abuseHEY! YOU JUST CAN'T STOP AN AWESOME STORY LIKE THIS! I just stumbled across your story and ate it up like candy until I find it's not finished! on knees PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ~_^!
Demostheness 2007-02-22 ch 9,	abuseHey. Just caught up to your last chapter! It's really very good. (Poor Greg.) Anyways...I'm loving it so far! Keep up the good work!
shabbii 2006-06-07 ch 9,	abuseHi. Just dropping by to say that I am absolutely hooked on this fic. Can't wait for your next update, which is why i have added it to my alert list and wait with bated breath haha. Shabbii
BlindDreamer2009 2006-05-27 ch 9,	abusepoor greg=( great story,can't wait to read more
Duckie24 2006-05-11 ch 7,	abuseI am an extremely lazy person who almost never reviews. I used to review most everything I read, but those days are over. Anyhoo, I am now finally going to review your story. I love it. I've always loved it. I thought the first chapter was fantabulous. And then I stopped reading fanfiction for a while, and forgot about this little gem. I was recently browsing through Greg/Sara fics and found it, and I'm so glad I did. You're an excellent writer who tells a great story very well and portrays the characters true to who they actually are. I love the bit about the Sadie following Sara into the bathroom in this chapter because my cat Taffy does that all the time. I also love the ending scene of this chapter with Sara shooting down Grissom. I'm not sure when you posted this chapter, but everything that happened in this scene still applies to episodes today. I feel like Grissom has been childish with Sara and is only paying her attention now because she's finally moved past him. Even though she isn't actually with Greg on the show, she looks happier and no longer pines after a man who is incapable of maintaining a healthy long-term relationship. So, kudos to you for excellent writing and tremendous insight.
astronomylover 2006-05-07 ch 9,	abuseWow, this is amazing so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the phenomenal work - POOR GREG! I love Greg, and I really hope he gets better soon. He's amazing, and so utterly hot.
Darkmagic-luvr 2006-04-14 ch 9,	abuseahh! i can't type without tears streaming down my face! that's just soo sad! i love Greg and that's just so sad! i really love this story and i can't wait for an update! -x-liv
Dybdahl 2006-04-08 ch 9,	abusePlease update...
Dybdahl 2006-04-08 ch 8,	abuseIt's not that I didn't like the chapter, but it was really freaky to read. Moren = Mamma
Dybdahl 2006-04-08 ch 7,	abuseYou're going to hate me for this, but the Norwegian you wrote didn't make sense (although some was really funny). Mostly it was the grammar that made it sound wierd. So here: Hey, how come you’re always home? Hei, hvorfor er du alltid hjemme? Why did you call, Greg? Hvorfor ringer du, Greg? Not happy to hear from me, mother? Er du ikke glad for å høre fra meg, mamma? Yes, you know I am. Det vet du jeg er. How’s Papa Olaf? Hvordan har Bestefar Olaf det? Good, good. He’s enjoying the spring weather and tending to his birds. Bare fint. Han nyter vår været og passer fuglene sine. Listen. I don’t have much time. I wanted to ask you about a phone call I got today. From the NYPD, a Detective Buzzano. He wanted to tell me they were reopening my case. I had no idea what he was talking about. Hør her, jeg har ikke mye tid, men jeg ville spørre deg om en telefon samtale jeg hadde i dag. Fra NYPD, en detektiv Buzzano. Han fortalte meg at de hadde gjennåpnet saken min. Jeg hadde ingen anelse om hva han snakket om. Oh God. I’ve been waiting for this call for 23 years. Herre Gud. Jeg har ventet på den samtalen i 23 år. So it’s true, there’s something to this? Så det er sant, det er noe i det? Gregers, you know I love you with all my heart. Instead of telling you about this, I’m going to send you something overnight. After you’ve read through it, you’ll have questions. Gregers, du vet jeg elsker deg av hele mitt hjerte. Jeg kan ikke fortelle deg dette over telefonen, men jeg sender deg noe over natten. Etter at du har lest det kommer du til å ha spørsmål. Why can’t you tell me now? Hvorfor kan du ikke fortelle meg det nå? Believe me, son. It’s better this way. I wish I could be there with you, but Papa needs me. This is not something you should learn about over the phone. Tro meg gutten min, det er bedre slik. Jeg skulle ønske jeg kunne være der med deg, men Bestefar Olaf trenger meg. Dette er ikke noe du burde få vite over telefonen. That was it.
Dybdahl 2006-04-08 ch 3,	abusecoastal village? That's kind of an insult. And apart from the coast comment, it sounds more like Switzerland then anything else. But the story is great, and I totally agree on the sparks of life comment.
Krissy S. 2006-03-31 ch 9,	abuseI absolutely love this story. I don't normally read fics until they are completed but there was something about this one that caught my attention and has held me spellbound since. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work. :-)
TigerButterflied 2006-03-29 ch 9,	abuseThis is so emotionally intense! Ironic how Sara's own trauma is the very thing that makes her able to be there for him in a deeper way.

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