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Tony WildRiver
2008-07-21 . chapter 2
KAWAII!! sorry. You portray thoughts and emotions very well. This was a most squee-ful read.
crash nebula
2006-02-24 . chapter 2
Ohohohhohohh. x33
So adorable. Loveloveloved it so much.
Si, Sora and Kairi are really adorable.
n_n

I am in awe of your wonderful writing skills.
You always write so magnificently and your visuals
are crystal-clear.

[favesfavevfavee[

~~ Aikokanei.
yume-face
2006-02-16 . chapter 2
Oh. So cute.
x33
Yes. Sora and Kairi are adorable.
Who DOESN'T like them together?
I worship your writing skills. You write so splendidly and give such clear visuals.
-favs-
- -- yy
KHfreak1992
2006-02-12 . chapter 2
aw thats so sweet!
Orchida
2006-02-08 . chapter 2
Lovely. Hee hee, I could just imagine Kairi ordering him around. Of course she's only doing it to help him but it's still cute. I love the way that you've made these two fit and it so should have been in the game. Here's hoping for little bits in KH2!

Sora's little ramblings are adorable, I loved the last little bit. Ooh I hope he tells her!
Niana Kuonji
2006-02-06 . chapter 2
Aww... n,.,n So cute! You really do an excellent job capturing the characters as themselves, instead of giving them your own brand of personality.

Starling: she's guilty of OOC'ing herself, but at least she worked the new attitudes in slowly. We're looking forward to more stories!
Iridaceae
2006-02-06 . chapter 2
wow, this is SO SWEET! i love it! great job, you deserve a cookie!
sora-is-a-hottie
2006-02-06 . chapter 2
i love this! man i've wanted someone to do something like this for so long! thank you so much for sharing your genius with us ginger!!
Lady Hitokiri
2006-02-06 . chapter 2
*draws in a multitude of 'Aw-ness'*
^_^ You always make everything so perfect. I liked how you had him think about the past a few years back and remember how they had both taken care of each other. I liked the line where you wrote: "She’d always been his light." That reminded me of when my username used to be HisLight. And the reason I made that name was because I knew that Kairi was Sora's light. ^_^ So cute. *tears up* It brings me back...

Fantastic work, as always. Keep up the great work, Cole. You always come out with the best writing pieces and this is no exception. :)
sutatikku
2006-02-06 . chapter 2
Don't you hate it when people on AIM log on and off over & over?

Ick.

Ohwells, I loved this.
Very cute. =)
Recently I've been very KairixSora-ish.
I'm starting a NaminexSoraxKairi thing right now.
&& It'll have RikuxNamine... and YuffiexSquall.
Sexay.

~~ayu.
kingdom219
2006-02-06 . chapter 2
THAT was VERY cute!

Great JOB!
Thymine
2006-02-06 . chapter 2
Yay, got it to finally upload? Hehe.

Aww, Sora is so sweet. I like how you did these two together from each of their point of views -- nice way to use both those words. Love the little refrences to their childhood too. Cute!

That's 3 down, only 97 to go? ;)
Viktor Mayrin
2006-02-06 . chapter 2
Cuteness! You did really well with this one Ginger. Keep up the good work.
Orchida
2006-02-04 . chapter 1
This is adorable,it's too cute for words and I don't think I've ever read a fic about just after this moment from Kairi's pov. At least not one that has stuck in my mind anyway. I could just imagine it and I loved the part where she just had to check that he was breathing. I also love the little snippets that you put in about the past, makes it all the more realistic - well in fanfic terms.

Now I'm extra glad that you decided to go in for this contest - I can't think what to call it - 100 thing sounds stupid. Whilst I'm on that, how cute is your icon for this! I'm on about on LJ! It made me laugh!

Aw, and she loves him... Next part!
Niana Kuonji
2006-02-03 . chapter 1
Aw...that's so damn cute. Lay you even odds they'll be curled up like puppies by dawn. n,.,n
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