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LadyBaisemon 2008-07-21 ch 9,	abuseVery realistic and believable. It all ties together quite nicely. Thank you for putting this up. I enjoyed it immensely.
LadyBaisemon 2008-07-21 ch 3,	abuseI'd be willing to bet that Kouichi won't be falling asleep in history again. Normally I wouldn't review a story until I finished reading it, but after this chapter I had to. First, I wanted to thank you, as silly as that sounds, for having Kouji realize that something was wrong. I hate reading stories where twins don't have a believable connection. Being a twin myself, it really ** me off when people screw with them. Also, I love the setting and the believability of it. I'm slightly obsessed with the Holocaust . . . and it's refreshing and . . . educational, interesting? . . . to read about the Japanese Relocation camps instead . . . This is a wonder piece of writing you have here and I look forward to finishing it.
Gallantmon ROX! 2008-07-21 ch 9, anon.	abuseYou should have shown a scene with Takuya's grandpa (if that was really true) recognizing them and what not. But still i liked it. I had read this fic before, but i stopped at chapter two, so i'm glad i got back to reading this. Did you have to make Kouichi almost be raped? That's gross. I liked Colonel troy, both the real one and the Lowemon one. Yes.
Angel Spirit 2008-01-11 ch 9,	abuseWow...oh WOW. I think WOW is the only word I can use to describe this fic, really and truly. I loved every minute of it...I liked how you had the focus on the twins throughout, and 'Daniel'...LOL, it makes me kind of wonder what Takuya's grandfather's reaction would be like to meet the twins when Takuya introduced them to him...hmm...I wonder if he'd remember them? Beautifully well done fic...and an awesome read as well, this is SO going on my fav's.
Angel Spirit 2008-01-11 ch 4,	abuseAh...okay...NOW you've got me CRYING...;_; I can't remember the last time that I've cried during a fic. I really like this fic...it's so...so...DIFFERENT. And I'm always about different plots and uniqueness, you've really got something going here...I'm kind of excited to see what happens next and am practically sitting on the edge of my seat (even with the awful ending of this chapter and it making me cry and all...darn you evil author! >.
Iaveina 2007-12-20 ch 9,	abuseIt's the mark of a truely brilliant writer when a reader can go away from a story category for over a year and still remember the names of a story and the author's name. =D
XxDaScenexX 2007-08-16 ch 9,	abuseTHIS STORY MADE ME CRY!! and this story reminded me of a movie.. oh well ^.^ i luv it but it still made me cry!!
Tamsin M 2007-03-07 ch 9,	abuseVery well written! I feel educated as well as entertained.
Light's Blue Blossom 2006-06-30 ch 9,	abuseOh my...this was really good and creative! Keep it up!
panchuu 2006-06-30 ch 9,	abusesugei dayo...
Gwydion 2006-06-18 ch 9,	abuseFinally had a chance to finish reading this one! Great job with it, I must say! I liked the historical facts it was based on being added at the end and the beginning of certain chapters - it seemed to give the fic more depth or something. I also like how you worked it into the Digimon storyline by using Lucemon as the ultimate cause of what happened. But I especially like the end where you mention that the twins will be going to see Takuya's grandfather. It makes me smile to try and imagine what that meeting would be like. Very nice job, and good luck with future projects! ^_^
Syaoran-Lover 2006-06-11 ch 9,	abuseI have to say this leaves a feeling of incapability and incompetence. I always feel like this when I study History (which is why I hate it). Read something, hate what happened because of it and not being able to do anything can drive anyone mad! >.< TOO MANY TYPOS! Consider a reivew of this last chap, there were so many erros! ^^'' I'm not sure I understood all of it, and I still agree with Kouji's initial reaction, but what's done is done. Geez, talk about "katte na koto o shiagatte"! Those 3 Digimon are starting to get on my nerves! >.< I would have loved to know the grandfather's reaction once he got a look at our favorite twins! >D And wouldn't it be so nice if the kids decided to play a little trick, especially since they're holding that bandanna! XD Thanks for another KK fic! :)
Syaoran-Lover 2006-06-11 ch 8,	abuseWhen'd you get this up?! o.O OK, someone died, bully is helping, good rebellious boy is trying to stop rebellion... you on something I should know? ^^' Haha! A FAKE Colonel Troy? @.@
Kari Minamoto 2006-05-30 ch 9,	abuseI loved it! I wish it didn't end! You should do more historical fiction, er, fics. I love them and it was so well written! I was right daniel was Takuya's grandfather (at least I'm assuming that's what was being inferred). It was great. I wish there was more but alas all good things must end! Have fun on vacation and continue to write, your amazing at it! ~Kari Minamoto
everkitsune 2006-05-29 ch 9, anon.	abuseoh...its over already? heh, i can just imagine daniels surprise when he sees them...it would be a nice story, like a one-shot sequel or something like that...but, its not necessary, as its fun to invent the meeting in our minds for fun...i think sometimes readers like that...i do...well anyway, i loved the story, all its factual info, heck, it might even help me on my american history exam!

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