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Reviews For: Lacuna

Diary 2008-01-13 ch 1,	abuseI enjoyed this.
KarmaKat 2007-04-18 ch 1,	abusePerfect! It fits that scene so well and is so bitter sweet. I'm not a fan of this pairing but this was well done! KarmaKat: Like fate but with great, bloody claws.
Silindro 2006-09-21 ch 1,	abuseThat was absolutely gorgeous. Chapter 374 of the manga made me seriously want to cry.
BlackMamba07 2006-04-27 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this one shot. The style is interesting, and you put a lot of emotional oomph into a very short story. I think you captured their relationship very well--it was original and yet true to canon at the same time. Congratulations on your well-deserved IYfanguild nomination.
paynesgrey 2006-04-06 ch 1,	abuseOh wow, Cinnie! I can't believe I've never read this before. It's so beautiful and sad. I think you did a realistic and excellent job with the pairing!
dumdeedum 2006-02-13 ch 1,	abuseI agree this is a very good effort towards a pairing I'm not partial to either. sigh I really liked Kagura! Too bad she was killed off. Rumiko Takahashi creates wonderful characters but eventually doesn't know what to do with them! No wonder IY is so popular in fanfiction because all her characters get stuck playing the same scenario over and over again. Oh well, enough of my rant. This is a well written piece of work, like your other stories. It's sad in a kind of Hans Christian Andersen Little Mermaid sort of way but a tad more upbeat. Just a tad.
Shoomy2003 2006-02-06 ch 1,	abuseI love how in a sense you summarize what happens in the real manga, but interject her feelings where the true author couldn't. I wrote something similar. I guess mine could be an afterward of yours! ^_^
Aseret Kitsune 2006-02-04 ch 1,	abuseThis was amazing. I love the emotion and style. Great job. The imagery was magnificent. Great job and keep it up! Hope you don't mind if I add this to my C2.
dedanaan 2006-02-03 ch 1,	abuseThis was pretty sad. I could completely fit myself into Kagura's situation here. I love how this story is shaping up. The last line was perfect.
Princess Ashes 2006-02-03 ch 1,	abuseGood fic... Gotta love the Kagura/Sess pairing...
Sabriel41 2006-02-03 ch 1,	abuse...I'm left with a lump in my throat and a smile in my eyes; for a duo you're apathetic towards, you presented them well. . The path you take with these characters is well-trodden - death is a large part of these two characters, so it appears in many of their stories - but your twist works, and is fittingly bittersweet. I'm neutral on the effect of the sentences in brackets, as sometimes they work and sometimes they distract from the narrative. . Your attention to detail is really what makes "Lacuna" stand out, whether it is in Kagura's curiosity over how blood can rush through her if she has no heart, or her thoughts on Naraku - "she is just another one of them" almost hurts to read. . Hope this helps a little, and sorry for rambling. Cheers! ~Sabriel.

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