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Inchoate Designs
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
I'll say it again, although it's really getting repetitve, good work. This again had a bit of a "worship" or fangirl feel because of how much Kai is complemented, which I generally dislike. However, I did like reading about the characters' reactions to being photographed (Kai's as well as the Blitskrieg Boys').
Ninka =o)
2009-03-17 . chapter 1
It's great! I must admit, every time I read your stories I have feeling that anything you write is part of the anime. Seriously ! =o) I don't care what others people thinking abou Beyblade anime. I agree with you that they don't understand what Beyblade is really about. And I hate those stupid stories, which lampooning this anime. You inspire me so I strated write my own stories,but in Czech, because I thik I am not able to write it right in English. =o) Thank you, your stories are the best. I visit this side often since 2005 and each time I find some interesting stories by you or other authors, who love Beyblade. I look forward to next stories! Keep it up! =o)
everfaraway
2008-10-15 . chapter 1
Wow!
Dixon Oriole
2008-04-01 . chapter 1
Favoriting this. Normally I'd be rude and just read and smile and click favorite and flutter off shaking my head, but you said you prefer people to review as well so here I am. Telling you that as I read I smiled, and I'm not sure what to say to a master without degenerating into comparative self-loathing.

Because, for example (this goes for all the characters really) after writing a bit of Spencer yesterday and wondering what the hell I was talking about, I read the description of Spencer in here, with his amusement, thought about it and realized you're probably right and I'm probably wrong. Your methodology is sound; I need to rewatch this show, find it online somehow I suppose, with a notebook in hand paying attention to EVERYTHING. On mute as much as with sound.

I think it's been so long that I'm forgetting how certain characters ARE, and then worrying that my making ** up just isn't accurate. Your talent for accuracy is something to aspire to. It makes me self-conscious but that's a good thing. I have to be if I want to do well at writing these characters. Need to know whether my uncertainty is there because they're truly untested waters, or because I just don't remember the canon.

I remember that Spencer was a puppy for Boris in the first season, played cards with Ian, seemed thoughtlessly loyal to his team (or at least Boris), added the beef/intimidation factor but not in the unintelligent way that Gary does, and I remember that he was all business with strangers. Not grandiose, but reliable. The third season he was... well, around. Standing there. Offering thuggish support in hallways versus loudmouths. Bailed out, like Bryan, on Tal during the Kenny & Daichi fight. There's something missing there. The tiny links I just need to rewatch and find. There's a lot of personality to be inferred from small observations; the very ones I sometimes lose track of.

It's those small perfect details that make fiction sing for me; leave me nodding that yeah, that was perfect. They were perfect. The ones that leave me satisfied with yours. I can tell as much as the next guy when something is wrong. I just can't always tell what's right, which is a pain when writing. Otherwise it's just throw everything against the wall, see what sticks. More watching the show, I think, if possible. More reading your stories at least if not. I think I can trust you to tell me exactly what you see.

Thanks for writing this, and, erm, everything else! As ever you leave me truly humbled, pleased, and gently reassured that it's possible.
- Dixon
Anodynic Love
2008-02-24 . chapter 1
Please excuse me. I have to go wash my face now.

[in a good way]

It's amazing...x)x)x) Whoa -has a Kai-fangirl moment- Check out my fics please? Would love the feedback(:
.EverLastingFun.
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
Hehe... I remember reading this somewhere before last time... Finally found it ^.^
mizakichi
2007-11-21 . chapter 1
i love it! the comments of the camera team make me laugh so hard, i would love to draw something for this.
if only the scanner wasn't so problematic...
^-^
IceWolf15
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
Sigh! I still can't think clearly now!
angel of darkness/light
2006-09-23 . chapter 1
I think I'm gonna faint.*thump!*Ok thats better.You are absolutely AWESOME!You are officially my favourite author.I simply LOVE your oneshots,they are so...awesome.Please write more!
SpiritualEnergy
2006-06-06 . chapter 1
Lol, this was so funny. And in character too, in my opinion! Photoshoots...lol, I can picture that being something they wouldn't like. ^^ Heehee, I loved the way you descirbed how they act towards their fans and how the pictureshoots are and everything. Great oneshot!
rein
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
this is so beatiful. i really enjoy this. it is simply divine. the discriptions of/on kai were wonderful. they were so accurate in every way possible and you made it so enjoyable. this is a great piece of writing. you could even call it art. just so perfect and beatiful.
IrishPotatoes
2006-03-06 . chapter 1
Yes!! I almost died in my seat when I found out you wrote a new fic (and a second time while I was reading it... and then a third when I found out I was reading this a month late. T_T)! Love it. Perfection as always.
... And I want one of them pictures. ;P yummeh.
Crimson Breeze
2006-02-26 . chapter 1
Awesomeness.I loved it. This is going on my favourites list.great job~
~Crimson Breeze
YuriyTalaIvanov
2006-02-15 . chapter 1
great ficy. ^_^ poor tyson (NOT!)
EpitomeOfMisery
2006-02-10 . chapter 1
yay! Another triumph! You've outdone yourself yet again! Keep up the good work!
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