 D.G. Ling 2010-01-03 . chapter 15dude, I just spent my whole evening reading this... |
 Dawn Haruno 2009-12-23 . chapter 1Oh god...
First, I saw the link to your story and decided "Oh, what the hell, I'll click it."
And you've got me really impressed.
I've barely finished reading the first chapter, and you've gotten me hooked on this story. XD
And the characters-!
So in-character and saying what I'd imagine them to say in the actual episode.
I so agree with Zino on the little details, especially the way Cartman replied to Kyle.
"Is he Kyle? Is he?"
Pure win! <3
I suddenly starting getting into South Park, I kinda forgot how it happened, but I keep finding myself fishing around for fanfics. I feel like your story will be so worth it! ;] |
 realfakegold 2009-09-17 . chapter 13Hahaha the stupid **/you're the blonde/slim hips thing is from This Lullaby~Sarah Dessen, right?
& Great fic, totally hilarious! |
 GladeSistas 2009-09-12 . chapter 15. . . Really great story. I seriously don't usually like reading any Style fics, but this definitely is changing my mind. You captured the characters completely; and it was so surprising that you could make Cartman still be Cartman when he is in love with Wendy. I really don't know what else to say honestly, I'm speechless. ^^
Oh, and know I'm in love with the Butters/Kenny pairing. ^^; You are an amazing writer!
Emma <3 |
 KennyIsOrange 2009-08-26 . chapter 11aw stan is a meany! i almost cried when he freaked out at kyle. so sad :'( |
 crossmyheartforever 2009-07-27 . chapter 15Spetacular story. Really admire how your poured so much life into these characters and made their every word and action seem so realistic and raw. It's amazing how you created such a round-a-bout and powerful tale starting with a typical boy that loves his bestfriend. There are many stories that follow such a plotline, but I truly believe your's is exceptional. From the confusion, denial, and fear to exceptance and crazy longing; you've depicted Stan so well. And through all the anger and remorse, Kyle really suffered a lot.
Moving tale of friendship, heartache, and two people maturing along the path of romance. |
 SleepwithaSmile 2009-07-20 . chapter 15I'm so glad I stayed around to read this. It was so worth it!
Possibly the greatest Style story I've read so far. Loved every part of it! The pairings are fantastic- You've drawn me into ButtersKenny. (And I'm really starting to love WendyCartman.)
And for once, there wasn't declarations of love on the first or second chapter. Just talks of boners. XD |
 Zino 2009-07-13 . chapter 1Now, where to beging. I read this couple of days ago, but it was so late night I don't think I could have make a good review back then XD So I'm commenting now.
First of all, this was maybe the best fanfic I've ever read! And I've read many... I usually stay away from the fic which are more than 3 chapters long (yes, lazy reader XD Can't take too much english...), and I was little unsure at first cuz this has 15 chapters. BUT luckily I started to read it!!
I loved everything in this! You're awesome ficwriter. All the charcters were just like in the real show. Things like Cartman saying "Is he Kyle? Is he?" were awesome details, and made me love this fic even more.
Also, I liked your choise of pairings ;) (lately I've bene a real sucker for Style and Bunny) and this was maybe the first time I read some Cartman/Wendy. Totally liked it! :D
Ah, I had SO MANY favorite moments and quotes here, but can't remember which chapter had which XD. But one of them was when Kyle said to Kenny "You’re just saying that because you want Butters all to yourself. What happened, did the player accidentally fall in love with one of his toys?" I loved the last senyence SO much. <3 Other Thing I loved was that Kyle and Stan didn't just do the normal kiss and " i love you too" stuff, cuz that has started to bor me lately XD (Stan having a boner for Kyle <3<3<3)
Gah, I still could have written a better comment, but I need to start reading this again! And I have really no words to descripe how awesome this really is. <3 After this other fics have just felt little boring and plain, no match for this. Thank you very much for this awesome fic. Thanks to this I'm having a major South Park kick now. Started to watch all the epidodes and stuff. Hope you write more !! :D |
 Sybil Corvax 2009-07-10 . chapter 15Cartman is a **! Still, the story was awesome and I've actually never thought of StanXKyle before reading it...hm... |
 TheGoddessAthena 2009-07-06 . chapter 1Nicely written, funny, and just brilliant.
This is my first South Park fic so I'm excited I found one with a great plot.
I can't wait to read more! |
 LonelyArmy 2009-07-05 . chapter 15OMG! This story is so awesome! You had me reading for hours on end! Seriously, I think this is one of the best Style fan fics I've ever read. Most just crash and burn, but this one acctually made coherent sense! I'm probably gonna read this again and again.
AWESOME! |
 lege et lacrima 2009-06-04 . chapter 15This was brilliant. I really enjoyed reading it. At first I had a couple of misgivings about them only being in 6th grade, but when I read the second last chapter, those misgivings were pleasently alleviated. And the ending... :D
It was really enjoyable. Thanks.
--L&L |
 Gabsi Wabsi 2009-05-25 . chapter 3 “What!” Butter’s exclaimed. “I wasn’t tryin’ to trick him, Kyle. I really like him.”
Kyle’s expression turned passive. “What?”
“Well,” Butter’s spread his arms wide. “I’m gay.”
Kenny pounded his fists on the table as another wave of hysteria coursed him. Kyle turned wide eyes toward Eric.
LMFAO!! I love it!! |
 DiD16 2009-04-18 . chapter 15I love you're stories and you're writing!! I want to read more! |
 Skipper713 2009-04-02 . chapter 15I absolutely loved this story.
Especially Kenny. Because Kenny is God. :D
And now I am off to read more of your Style fics.
Awesome job!!
~Skipper~ |