YES! wonderful story, very clever. I would still kill 'im though. :D

kool. it would really awesome if this was an actual carry on fic. nice.

Lol aw that was cute and funny. The gun part was hilarious!

wow. it is so awesome like awesome awesome. like radiating awesomenss. love it! just clever. just clever.
-Vi

love the royal slave fic and so is this!!

ahh cliffy...i hate em... update soon i like the start of the story ^^

i dont except your ending you need to make it longer :)

This is really good im glad u decided to post this. I mean seriously this is really good...but so are all of ur other fanfics. Neway i know u said this was a oneshot but i think this would be a really good story to start...so neway keep up the GR8 work and keep writing bcuz i absolutely *love* ur work! Well neway if u get enough inspiration or time, or if u decide to continue this...post when u can! Love this fanfic! Cya bye!

You've wanted to post this for a while? I'm glad you got this story off your chest then; these things should not be kept pent up.

I was thinking about this story when my little sister's boyfriend just walked in the door--I suddenly get the emotional resonance now.

Haha, clever defintitely describes Robin in this story. Pulling a gun and making Raven's date leave? That's just hilarious.

Good to see another story from you and I hope you update soon.

Joe Asha'man

Who is Richard?

NO WAY! that is not the end of that ENTIRE story! that was awsome but u really need a sequel!! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz! well i luved it!

Oh dang. I guess pointing a gun at their head is a way of seeing if the guy is actually dedicated enough to Raven, eh? o.O Well anyways, like Vic said, it was clever. But I have a feeling Raven will be a bit..er, annoyed. ^^' Well, I think this is going to be a great story, and it definitly has good potential. Great job!

.miyukiCHAN

*laughs* Very funny. This story shows a lot of potential, please update soon!

i like this idea, though you could've looked at your puctuation and capitalization before you posted. 2 questions: 1) why did Raven swear? 2) are they in collage or something?