Reviews for Unexpected Royalties

Reviews For: Unexpected Royalties

shajira 2006-06-16 ch 2,	abusewai! Luv it! ahahaha, kero-chan, i luv u! wehehehe, cute ultra cute super cute mega cute...wah, alright, what i mean i it is cute...ehehehe, pleae continue, it is really cute! ^_^
Lioness Amythest 2006-04-12 ch 1,	abuseHey. Just thought I'd review your story since you reviewed mine haha! Thanks. Anyways on to talk about your story. I see where you were saying that you see the stuff you write about. You've got quite the sarcastic Sakura going on. Her relationship with Touya is explosive! Haha good one.
Hidden Tala 2006-03-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseI was blocked because I already reviewed so I logged out. Cheers! I am so proud to be the beta of this ficcie! It was wonderful! Anyway, I forgot to change the "untangled" web part to tangled. I'm so sorry... This was lovely. I hope you'll update it soon! :)
Hidden Tala 2006-02-28 ch 4,	abuseYer right. Of all the chapters you've written, I certainly loved this one. Hmm, you could put the Japanese words in normal font, dear. I think it's more appealing that way. If you want the readers to understand them, make a translation on at the end or the beginning. Hey, I made a one-shot ficcie! I hope you'd read it! :)
Hidden Tala 2006-02-20 ch 3,	abuseGreat chapter! Update! Update! Update!
Hidden Tala 2006-02-10 ch 2,	abuseFirst, I think that this chapter is great and I really love it. It was too long, though. I guess I'm a little used with stories that've short chapters. I just still can't believe that this is a drama fic. It's really funny y'know. Yamazaki is so cute as a devil. Hahaha. And I really like the part where you said that he was almost banned by the music teacher because of his singing skills or lack thereof. I've a scene like that in my ficcie too. You have to guess who it is! Hahaha :) There are typos especially when you use the apostrophes in the dialogues, here's an example: Once her cousin almost finished, Sakura asked her the question she’d wanted to ask-I mean, demand before, stormily,” Why did you do that?” The apostrophe must enclose the 'why did you do that?' dialogue. I know that this is not intentional. I know very well that you are meticulous in your fics, so there. You really have the knack in describing things, ne? Keep up the good work! I'll be waiting for the next installment!
dbzgtfan2004 2006-02-04 ch 1,	abuseThis is a cute and sad story. Please continue. Sakura and Syaoran forever.
Hidden Tala 2006-02-03 ch 1,	abuseOh! What happens next?! And who was the boy she was supposed to meet? Hey, are you sure you put this on the right genre? It's really funny! :) You're a very descriptive writer, y'know. I like it :) I really wish I've the same talent but sadly I'm not. Hehehe =p I'd like to ask, how old is Sakura in the story? She's a high school freshman and is about 11 or 12? Making Touya 18 or 19? Anyways, I like this chapter! Continue soon!

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