I sounds like the two of you had a blast working on this chapter. Good job :)

I knew it! Well, I didn't exactly know it but I did have a feeling it was something like that with Emma and Hoshiko.

That is such a sad poem but it is still beautiful sounding. Good job on this story.

There certainly is a different kind of language in this Sailor Moon story, LOL. Its kind of refreshing. ;)

"The Missing Sailor: The Director's Cut." "The Missing Sailor" is bad enough- why would you want to embarrass yourself like this?

And please tell me- who finally told you you were a Mary Sue? I want to send them a gift basket.

Oh, and WHAT could "Another Senshi" be about!? Let me guess before I even read it.

One of your friends- either "Kasadi" (guarantee that's not her real name) or "Meggie" (though my money’s on Meggie)- show up in Japan for either a really stupid or no reason and it is revealed that they are actually a member of the Senshi! *gasp*

Go f* yourself and get a life (I just want to point out that I spared your ten year old innocence by censoring)

~Crouching Tiger, Hidden Flamer

Okay...You are not good. I'm sorry, but there, I said it. You’re not good. In fact, you’re downright awful. This character is *such* a Mary Sue! You obviously just wanted to be the star, the center of attention, for once in your life (which is the reasoning behind all suethors- that‘s why I never read author‘s notes). Suethors are so easy to figure out. Don't believe me? Let me tell you exactly who you are:

You are *not* the baby of the family- you're most likely in the middle and pushed to the side often to accommodate the older and younger siblings, OR you're the oldest and *still* pushed to the side to accommodate younger siblings yet you're also expected to be the big sis.

You are not popular, have never had a boyfriend- but you’ll *insist* that the guy who held your hand at recess in fifth or sixth grade was one, and then tell people how it ended badly because he cheated on you by giving his cookie to someone else during snack time.

However, you do have a crush, but it’s just “too impossible!” *dramatic pose* “He’ll never think of you that way!” And you’ve got all your friends feeling all sorry for you and trying to fix you two up, and it’ll be all chick-flickie and make a wonderful bedtime story for the lovely children you have together, which, thank god, are nothing like you, and take after him.

Which brings me to my next point. You go through a lot of pain- you know, trying to make us think you’re actually thinking with your retarded “acting skills” and everything- to make it clear how very devoted Sam is to you- I MEAN…Emma *Hanzo* *rolls eyes* So anyway, I’d just like to quote you, Emma Wannabewriter, in your rendition of Chapter 7:

“ARGH that laugh! I love that laugh. That beautiful sing song laugh! Oh Kami. I’m falling in love!” (‘oh kami?’) “Should I tell her? Yeah. BUT SHE LOOKS SO HOT! just a bra and jeans! So hot! But she’ll have my hide for a leather purse if I don’t tell her. okay. Here goes…” (‘a bra and jeans?’ small ten year old child, do your parents know what you’re writing about?)

And here’s where I had to put the tuna sandwich away:

“Emma smiled. She closed her eyes and started to sing “Wake me up when September ends” By Green Day in Japanese.” (Oh you’re so punk rock, singing Green Day in Japanese! What a rebel!) “That was the song playing now on the stereo. Sam listened to her voice. He wasn’t even paying attention to the words. Just the sound of her voice.

‘Her voice is so pretty.’

She sounded like she was In perfect tune. He just laid with her hand in his and listened to the sweet sounds of her singing. Soon Sam found himself falling asleep. When the song ended Emma looked over to him. Emma removed her hand from his and looked at his sleeping face. Emma turned off the stereo and went down stairs. It had only been five minutes after Emma started preparing dinner when Sam came downstairs again.”

““Right, I am going out because I want to. I love everything about you. Your eyes, your smile, your singing” he said but he was cut off.

“You fell asleep during my singing!” She growled at him.

“It was so pretty, it was like my own personal lullabye!” he reassured her. She looked at him suspiciously. “Back to the point! You even stood up to the school bitch to make sure I would stick around.”

“You have no regrets?” she asked him seriously.

“None, zippo, zilch,” he smiled. Emma smiled back at him.”

Hang on a minute. I have to go throw up.

Okay, I’m back. By the way, you spelled ‘lullaby’ wrong, you moron. So anyway, as I was saying before I cruelly made you read your own bile, you are, I think due to your description of this amazingly talented gorgeous character of yours, you are one of four things:

A. Ugly
B. Fishing for complements from friends who are reading this
C. Untalented, unpopular, unwanted by guys, *girls*, and “friends.”
D. All of the above, and then some. (

wow...GREAT STORY! i loved it! im going to start reading the next story right now!

wow, she's nuts

but she IS Sailor Star...what's she mad about?

*rubs head* okay, this is a Sailor Moon fic, and they're watching Sailor Moon on cartoon network. wow, i thought i saw everything here. lol

detention huh...is that why you have Rini state her boyfriend is always in detention?

you know, if you get sucked into a black hole, you can live for quite some time. You'll never get out, but you can live there!

things are starting to get a bit warped here.

"Not going to marry her or anything..." so wrong!

i wonder if Sammy will get any "powers"