Absolutely amazing. This is the best introspective story of Jak and Daxter I've ever read, and the best that described Jak's time in prison to boot. You filled my mind with terribly gruesome images, tugged at my heartstrings and brought about various emotions within me, and I loved every minute of it.

I love it, love it, love it!

This was amazing. So much emotion. You got Jaks character down perfectly.

-stares at my story- Ugh. MINE DOESN'T COME CLOSE TO BEING AS AWESOME AS YOURS ._.

Fantastic story!!

This was good, I want to see a sequel, it'd be intersting to see Jak tell Dax about everything that happened in prison. I've always wanted to see a story where he told Dax everything, even the rape

Utter Brill-i-ance! completely and utterly excellent, very, very well done!!

Wow. I must say. This is absolutely amazing. There were SOME discrepancies i didn't like, like Daxter finding out about Jak's voice ahead of time, but seriously, this was a very creative and inventive. I was addicted as soon as i started.

(storymaker12 of DA) That was a fantastic story! Though it took me about 2 days solid to read it... It was definatly worth it! So very worth it, I love all the true emotion one might feel in these horrir sercimsances. Absolutly marvolus!

I love it! About to check on your profile for more! This is excellent. Jak's emotions and even the Stakholme (sp?) syndrome at the end were explained PERFECTLY! Keep up the good work!

Book mark! I'll be back to read this later! :)

Oh my gosh this is such a good and intense story I can't really say much...you just absolutely downright rule at writing awesome stories! Man, this is awesome!

Keep up this extraordinary work!

Holy crap. This was AMAZING!

I love how you explained what happened to Jak during his two years of being experimented on. You captured the essence of all the characters so well...And the Daxter part was so sad! This is an awesome story and it makes me feel different emotions when I read it.

Wow~ ♥

-crimson

:D I really liked this story! It took me a while to read (which I was glad-- I don't really like multichaptered quick reads) and I really liked the ending. You also really explained how Jak grew into the person he is.

All in all a great story! Thank you very much for writing it!

Yes! Thank you for finishing this fic. I hate running across excellent pieces like this that have no ending. Anyway, I liked the end. It wasn’t anything flash or exotic or full of a chaotic mass of explosions. It was perfect … for all the things that happened to Jak, it ended with a renewed friendship and a sunset.

Great work, it was a joy to read and can’t wait for the sequel.

wonderful story! it's been forever since I've read a really good one like this. everyone was in character and it's all completely believable, if not very sad. great job! i look forward to more stories later! ^.^

This was the most...hm whats the word...Introspective? Look into Jak's prison time I've ever read. Great, great job Nashi-Sama.