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Shiba-X 2008-06-12 ch 11,	abuseWow...just wow. This brilliant. Just pure brilliance! I've visited your da account before and was extremely impresses but this is your best work yet. You HAVE to finish this. I'm dying to know how it's going to end! This is epic win!Poor Jak. I want to hug him so bad.Update Son!
Namesake 2008-06-01 ch 11,	abuse! Oh noes! Such an awful cliffhanger! I was all "uh huh...uh huh...tbc?!!" Please update soon!
someone addicted 2008-05-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseOMG PLEASE UPDATE! Your writing is fantastic. whines I want to read the rest. Please just one chapter! It's been so long since I started reading this. PLEZE
The Twilighter 2008-05-28 ch 11,	abuseHey, awesome story! No really I love the way you write, and I have this whole obsession with conflicted characters like Jak (probably why I love the games so much!) Anyway I'm eagerly awaiting the final chapter(s)!
Nostalgic Beauty 2008-04-07 ch 11,	abuseOh, poor Jak. Your writing is intoxicating in its potency. I wish you had continued it.
Night Fox Hiten 2008-03-01 ch 11,	abusegrin I freaking adore this.
ShadowChild Of Death 2008-01-19 ch 11,	abuseGood story please update.
Gentle Kit 2008-01-19 ch 11,	abuseAwesome fic! I can't wait for the next update! :]
Suicidal Sweety 2007-11-26 ch 11,	abuseNEU! Curses. End of chapter. Please update! I really like your story.
Darkening Light 2007-10-03 ch 11,	abuseOh. My. God. This fic left me speechless. I started reading it during a break but then I just HAD to finish it during the lectures. It's so completely riddled angst, hopelessness and despair. Simply amazing. It's one of the best, if not THE best fanfic I've read so far. The descriptions are so vivid, at one point in time I was trembling. This is a story which I'll come back to over and over again. It's excellence.
rim alunatic 2007-09-26 ch 11, anon.	abuseso...is this the last chapter? i luved it all^.^
Pytera 2007-09-23 ch 11, anon.	abuseI like all the chapters of the story Captive voice. I'm just wondering is there any more chapters or are you finished with the story? Please tell me when you can. Thanks Pytera
AlterEgoSadist 2007-09-08 ch 11,	abuseI read this a long time ago, back when I wasn't able to sign up for Fanfiction. And now I can! Yay, me! Wow... This is such a... there isn't a single word that can describe this! Its SO good! Filled to the brim with terror and suspense! You went deeper into the game than any other author's stories I have EVER read! So wonderfully chilling and mysterious! The interaction between Errol and Jak is so beautiful! You interpreted their thoughts exactly! You are a great author, I thouroughly enjoy reading your work! Now for some predictions. Is Errol going to try and capture Daxter? And then threaten Jak to kill him if he doesn't cooperate? I wonder how Jak would react to that... hm... i think he would turn Dark and kill Errol. And I mean, REALLY KILL him, not cripple or injure him like he always does. Sigh... Jak is so WEAK... he doesn't have the guts to kill the KG Commander...Toughen up, Jak!! And what did Errol inject Jak with? Is it a kind of anestheisic? (I didn't spell that right, did I?) This story has so many mysteries in it! Praxis and Errol are so PROUD of Jak. Its kind of weird! Anyway, great story! Please update soon!
Rad 2007-08-13 ch 11, anon.	abuseOmg I've been reading this story for a while but didn't realize you had a new chapter until now! PLEASE! ADD MORE! I WILL SEND YOU A MILLION COMMENTS! D: This is one of my favorite stories. Erol is amazing in this- and how to capture Jak's thoughts, lookign at hismelf the way he's changed. XP I love when he gets tranquilized and/or drugged. Sends a chill up my spine and makes me excited to see what happens next. CONTINUE!
jaklover123 2007-07-22 ch 11,	abuseomg this is good! it makes me hate erol and praxis with all the more passion! >.< i'll never forgive them!! there's never been a death or torture that was good enough for either of them! but i can see why jak won't kill him, though precursors only know how bad i want him to! well, hope i see an update soon, this fic seems to be getting near the end and it'd be such a shame if it died now!! >.

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