good ending

getting more interesting

what jack says sounds fair. i love how you come up with these innovative stories

Good ending!

Nice. Great job.

[“I probably deserved to be shot, anyway.”]

snicker. excellent

Awsome story! I really like it! Is Ferdinand a real person on Stargate or just a made up charactor. I like the little bit of sort of romance between Jack and Sam.

That was an awesome story and a great ending. I just wish it wasn't over. I look forward to reading more stories by you in the future.

i really liked this story, it was set out well and had a good plotline, i especially like the underlying s/j

it was a good fic :)

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yay! ya know, i really enjoyed that. keep it up. there aren't many fics anymore that not only have a decent plot, let alone a plot at all, but are also well written. this was both. lol.

Great chapter...I wasn't ready for it to be over so soon however! I love that you stuck true to the characters, though of course, I am always ready and willing for some romance between Jack and Sam! I am hoping you add an epilogue...let us know what Colburn finally finds to do that he enjoys and makes his father proud of him! And maybe that bit of romance, or at least a little more closeness between our intrepid heroes! (hint, hint)

I am glad this was resolved! Good Job!

"There was a slight pause as they watched Teal’c pick off one of the weaker cookies of the pack." Loved that line! Great story, good characterization. I can really sympathize with Jack and his entirely justifiable (in my opinion) actions against the idiot, Colburn.

Yay!

But...no more? That's sad. *sniff*

-sil

Nice wrap up but I think I might have liked to see this go to Court Martial, and then have the twit get his revelation and making the apology in a much more public

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