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Reviews for: A Land Of Dreams
carnival justice
2006-02-11 . chapter 1
The description was very effective. I can see how relieved Hakkai would be to wake up from a dream like that, but also how frightened he would be. Good work.
SafireGriffon
2006-02-03 . chapter 1
(blinks) AH! Oh my gosh, I think *I'm* going to have nightmares for a week! With all the blood and the dismembered bodies and empty eyesockets and maggots and . . .It was very descriptive. It was very good. I have no doubts that Hakkai has dreams like this. I'm gonna go grab Mr. Snuggles and hide under the covers now.
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