Why Sunrise?! Sergay was a murderer. Even if it was just following orders. Then Nina's rediculous lusting after him turned ehr into a killer. Poor Ers chan.

Ah! That was so sad!

This one is so sweet, and who knows Erstin might come back since it's she went like most of the characters in HiME. Here's hoping. //Tries to find more Nina/Erstin fics// Well I love what you done, it will be nice to see somemore Natsuki/Shizuru fics though.

my that was a bit psychotic, nicely done tho ^^ a much different style so props for that. yeah was one heck of a scene and this is a nice take on it. seems the pair wasn't meant to be, but thats what fans like you are for hehe

So... Well, first of all the idea of Nagi ordering Nina to destroy the slave doesn't seem so... smart considering that he is allied with the schwarz. Of course, it could be the "final" touch to the "army clearing city out of invading forces and rescuing windbloom" plan. And yes, it's kinda confusing at parts. Another complaint comes from Arika's death threats, I doubt she will really try to KILL Nina, just beat the hell out of her(but... the fight will probably be interrupted and what not before that happens. Also, if Nina did feel that strongly about Erstin, she wouldn't kill her even if it was under orders from her master... besides, if Nina would go suicidal after that, it wouldn't do Nagi much good either. How Nina reacts in your fic seems like she did kill Ers indirectly and on accident like it happened in the anime.

Now that I've done whining about things that bothered me, I'll give you a bit of praise. Other than the fic being confusing at parts, and the "weird" idea about Nina destroying the slave under Nagi's orders, the fic is nice. Very emotional, and kinda touching to say the least. I also particularly liked how you used the flashbacks, really brought out the nice Nina/Ers moments in the anime, and kinda gave them a new POV if you think that Nina might have been returning Ers's feelings in those. I also very much liked how you described Nina's feelings when Ers is/has died. But for her to want to die after accidentally/on purpose killing Erstin, it would require her to return Ers' feelings VERY strongly.

Thanks for the pleasant reading experience, this thing made me feel bit better after watching that ep ~_~ Kinda late, forgot to review when I first read this fic. And lastly, a bit of a request: We already have a ton of **/Nat fics, but this is our only Nina/Ers one *hint hint* I hope you'll write another oneshot or even multichapter fic about these 2, maybe have Ers actually confess this time, if that's what you wanted to see happen in the anime. (I know I wanted to see that ~_~ too bad that sunrise is made of mean teasing... anime producers).

*added to author alert list incase you publish more otome/hime ficlets*

Don't get too sad, 'cause its pbly going to happen like the mai-hime ending, where all the people who "died" came back. So there is hope for a ers/nina confession, hopefully!

Good fic... Quite emotional.. Keep it up! Can't wait for your Shizuru/Natsuki fic!!

Lovely fic, the small details you inserted were nice and Nina's mental emotional breakdown was nicely done. Same with Arika's and Erstins farewell. If only Nina really lost her marbles because of Erstin, and not the blasted handkerchief >_>. Anyways, thanks for the fic, god knows theres not enough Nina/Erstin. Good luck with your ShizNat one also :).

Oh...my...so sad! But I could see this happening. I too was sad they had to go and green-sparkly Ers-Chan. Ah, this is well written, and all together good. ^-^ Very emotional. Can't wait for the Shizuru/Natsuki story you're writting. ^-^

~Painestwin