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ReveredGeek4GSR
2006-07-02 . chapter 7
Great story. The interaction between Grissom and 'Mother' made me think of "Psycho" for some reason... lol. I love it, keep up the great work!
Miss Howard
2006-07-02 . chapter 7
HAHA! That was such a good ending!! I laughed so hard at the waiter part! As for describing Grissom's anger like volcanos, it was so funny! Well done! Good on Mrs Grissom!
SGBS4L
2006-07-02 . chapter 7
‘9 years, 3 months, and…4 days’ was funny keep going
jtbwriter
2006-07-02 . chapter 7
Okay-a bit OOC that Gris would walk off and leave his
mother like that-but still it was cute-thanks for finishing
this!
CSIfreak4ever
2006-03-22 . chapter 6
yay! cant wait for more! great story so far.
jtbwriter
2006-03-12 . chapter 6
Sara and Gris...sigh.

I love that Sara told him about his mother staying
with her...but teasing him just wasn't the right
thing to do.

On the other hand..Gris has to tell Sara how he
feels totally-and his mother.
Thanks for the update-now what?:)
ayesha-s
2006-03-12 . chapter 6
lol.. that was a another great chapter!
QueenKate
2006-03-12 . chapter 6
damn griss is a puss! oh well we still love him. good story!

~kate
CSIfreak4ever
2006-03-06 . chapter 5
aww, can't wait for more!!
star-shimmered-dragon
2006-03-06 . chapter 5
WHAT?! SPIDERS?! How old was Grissom when he did this? My god...i can imagine a little boy, about ten, letting them loose. hehe...
Nice story so far. Keep it up
GunShotResidue
2006-03-06 . chapter 5
Great chapter, when are you posting another?? :)
Cocoa Girl
2006-03-01 . chapter 4
I hope that Sara will decide not to find out, out of which two of them are more stubborn and just have Grissom's mom stay with Sara. She can have Sara's bed and Sara can sleep on the couch. Maybe as payment Giadia can tell embarrassing stories about Gil and teach Sara sign?
shania1277
2006-02-26 . chapter 4
Well Grissom being called Sissy that's really sweet;)but why being so mean with his poor mummy,I hope she'll stay at Sara's house and tell her some embarrassing stories about him .Your fic is great, keep going and update soon:)
jtbwriter
2006-02-25 . chapter 4
That is good-but I just don't see Gris putting his
poor mother in a hotel! If Sara wants to have her
stay-she should!

Interesting take on Gris's privacy issues-he needs
to grow up though when it comes to his mother's
wants!

Thanks for a good read-now what?:)
csi1gil1
2006-02-25 . chapter 4
more more more i want to see how this goes .. and shame shame on gris for making his own mother cry but we all know he is good at making the women that love him cry . please cont with this it has so much potential.
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