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| dumbblonde76 2007-03-25 ch 20,  | abusethis is a great story! calla is hilarious! |
| tensixtythree 2006-07-14 ch 22, anon. | abuseI do not like Jaclyn's parents. THey treat her as if she was 12 yrs old!!1 |
| writingtiger 2006-06-26 ch 24, | abuseInteresting format for ending, but I would have stopped with the birth of Daniel Pierce. Gets a bit confusing after that, but that's a cool way to handle the last chapter. Kudos! |
| celticmaggie 2006-06-20 ch 24, | abuseSo who was the ghost? Daniel or Hawkeye's mother. I felt so sad when Hawkeye (Ben) passed away and also Jacklyn. That was a vry clever ending to a great story. |
| Major-Baby 2006-06-17 ch 24, | abuseVery very cute ending! I really liked it! It was unusuall how you did it but that was a very good idea! Bravo! |
| writingtiger 2006-06-15 ch 23, | abuseAhh, I'm a sucker for happy endings. It's funny becuase I actually had the Enya song running through my head every time I saw the "Only Time" title! This was an awesome story!! |
| Major-Baby 2006-06-14 ch 23, | abuseYay! You finished! I loved the ending...I'm glad there were at least some tears on Jaclyn's part. I loved this story! Bravo! The part with the mirror was weired but cool! Well done! I love this story! |
| beo-go-deo 2006-06-12 ch 22, | abusegood good. I like Calla especially. Chapters are a little short though |
| Major-Baby 2006-06-08 ch 22, | abuseHaha wow! This is strange! Very funny though; I loved her being called Mrs Pierce. This better have a happy ending! I loved this chapter! Only one complaint...it was so short! You're torturing me! lol...very good job though! |
| 4077hawk 2006-06-05 ch 21, | abuseLoved Hawkeye's humour in this chapter. But what a place to cut it off! Just when he and Jaquci were about to make things interesting!! |
| writingtiger 2006-06-05 ch 21, | abuseOhh,, they get locked in a room with no one else to lock it. A bit spooky...yet it's obvious they still like each other, but in the meantime, I'm enjoying the journey of reading about it. |
| Major-Baby 2006-06-04 ch 21, | abuseTHEY HAVE TO STAY TOGETHER! You've been tourturing me like this for weeks! Please stop! All I want is a tidy, happy little ending where the guy gets the girl. I'm not in the mood for a depressing ending! Hawkeye seems like he really still loves her but Jaclyn seems rather confused...straighten her out! Have I ever mentioned how much I absolutley love this story? WELL I DO! Please update soon! Fabulous chapter! |
| writingtiger 2006-05-25 ch 20, anon. | abuseIt was nice seeing Calla's POV, but I think Jaclyns POV makes Calla more entertaining. They're still married huh? Normally I'm a big HM fan, but I'm loving every chapter, except the one where Daniel dies, that's kinda sad, but other than that... |
| Major-Baby 2006-05-22 ch 20, | abuseI like seeing it from Calla's point of view...but I like Jaclyn too. (I'm very indecicive can you tell?) I really liked this chapter; the letter was a really nice touch. As was Calla calling Margaret Hot Lips. hehe. I was confused for a moment because I'm so used to HM that I couldn't understand how Margaret was in two places at once...lol not a good sign lol. Awesome chapter; I hope you update soon! |
| Major-Baby 2006-05-19 ch 19, | abuseYes, getting better with every sentence! I can't believe that they are still married! That is an awesome twist! Have I mentioned before that you're killing me by making me wait so long between chapters? lol. Please please please update soon! |