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Z.Quill 6/4/10 . chapter 1
Oh, my god! When I first decided to look and see if there were any Western Yugioh! fics, I thought there wouldn't be any. But, to find some, and then to find this one which is so good, was hugely shocking! Great job getting the characters to keep their personalities even in this setting. Though, I disagree with Kaiba being the sheriff; he seems more like the type to be breaking the laws than enforcing them to me. I loved this!
JaganshiKenshin 10/16/06 . chapter 1
LOL... good one!
Maat's Feather 3/23/06 . chapter 1
Very funny! Can't say I've read a YGO western before. Mai was perfect, I loved Yugi, and Tea, poor thing, well I guess she kind of showed them all at the end.
CoWz-In-GrAsS 3/12/06 . chapter 1
That was cool, real cool. I wonder how Tea the Star is doing...
kilnorc 2/25/06 . chapter 1
heheheh, now, this is the FIRST wild west fic i've read with the Yugioh gang. and i must admit...it's very well written! i've seen tons of old westerns so this does very well in the category! -claps- Bravo! any chance of a sequel?
animefanatickid25 2/5/06 . chapter 1
great job there! _ Weird but i like it! _

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Tawnykit 2/4/06 . chapter 1
Aha, I remember this one! Glad to see you finally finished it!

Sheriff Seto. That is still the coolest idea I've heard in a long time.

Hehee. I like Mokuba saving the day. He doesn't get to do that very often. Note to self: write story where Mokuba saves the day. Great job!
KAOBAluvr101 2/3/06 . chapter 1
Cute story. Eveyone seemed pretty much how they r in the show, which is good. You should write a sequel.
CfB 2/3/06 . chapter 1
I love the last line most expecially! And I think you nailed Mai's character in this-she was just like herself. Therefore, I really liked how annoyed all the other characters got with her except Joey. (I agree with the other characters.)

Also, I really liked Tea's change in attitude, going to dance, and how much Duke and Tristan fought over Serenity, treating their "captive" so nicely. Overall, nice work!
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