FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| saphirerae 2008-07-01 ch 1,  | abuseGood story. Very funny |
| Emma 2008-02-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat was fantastic...I was laughing out loud at the Lee-Lee bits and all the other nicknames. The light teasing manner between Kara and Lee (and the rest of the pilots) was perfect. Yeah Fluff |
| Samantha Delano Jackson se ... 2007-09-13 ch 2, | abuseI can't tell you how many times I've read this story. It is one of my favorites about Kara and Lee because I think that you nail their relationship all the way from the Academy up to present day and both of their personalities. The first part is so light humored and nice .. and the second just shows them right in their element you did such a wonderful job. I especially like the fact that it's an outsider, Admiral Cain, trying to figure out what the relationship is while everyone is in on it... Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderfully light hearted shortie!! |
| Ell 2007-06-10 ch 2, anon. | abusevery cool. I like it. the second chapter had a lot of run on sentences, but the story was good. |
| VK 2007-02-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseCute. Very adorable. However, might want to find a beta, there were some gramatical errors. But, very funny and fluffy. Loved the Pegasus pilot only getting 48 kills. Nice touch. VK |
| jamy21 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abusehaha okay I know I'm supposed to be reading Who Are We, but I got sidetracked, and I'm glad I did. This cracked me up! Just what I needed after watching UB. |
| Jillie Rose 2006-09-28 ch 2, | abuseI was fighting back giggles the *entire* thing. Seriously funny, though a couple of editing points jarred. Thoughts don't need to be in '' by the way. Great fic, hilarious. Loved it. |
| Silwyna 2006-07-30 ch 2, | abuseThis was great. I really enjoyed reading it. :) |
| Loopylou 2006-06-14 ch 2, | abuseVery nice! |
| Loopylou 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! Love it! One thing I noticed- you mixed 'your and you're' up here: “Oh your wearing the flight suit I got you, don’t you look adorable,”. That should be you're. Hope that helps! |
| Jaby 2006-06-11 ch 2, | abuseLee-Lee... Sweetpea... You got me laughing out loud. This story deserved you a place on my Author Alert list. More, please? |
| Yolanda 2006-05-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh God! This Fic is awesome, you must write a sequel. |
| Mel 2006-05-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love love loved this story- definitely my fave I've read so far. That last scene was incredibly sexy- awesome job! |
| Rachel Kirk 2006-05-10 ch 2, anon. | abusevery, very good! |
| Hell-of-Fire 2006-04-06 ch 2, | abuseI absolutely LOVE this fic! Don't know what else to say, it was just great! Thank you so much for writing it! It will definetely go straight on my fav list! |