 Midoriori 11/9/11 . chapter 20Awwwww, kinda weird but really cute story. I couldn't stop reading it. |
 anon 7/24/11 . chapter 18 I don't think I can use simple words as awesome or amazing to describe this story..It's beyond awesome or amazing..you are a very talented writer..and this is one of the best stories I've read in a long long time...extremely creative..so sweet..just everything you could want in a story..wow! is all I can say :) |
 Cara2012 6/4/11 . chapter 20Wow this was such a great story i loved it ) |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/12/11 . chapter 20*Drops half empty bucket of popcorn on the ground in shock*
THAT WAS AWESOME! I LOVED THE FREAKING HELL OUT OF THIS STORY!
Mr. Wuggles you are one of the coolest writers ever! I loved it.
The fight was so masterfully done. I'm glad you made it a tie between them. I half hoped that Vegeta would win but I think it's better that way.
As always your lemons were banged on. Marvelous! Simply
Marvelous!
Great work!
Although I am saddened to see such the story end but like alot of great thinsg, it was going to have to end eventually. Man I hope you made a squeal or are considering to make one.
Great read, sweet humor, lovely romance, nice fluff moments, cool writing. Overall you get a 1,000,000 stars! |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/12/11 . chapter 19Hmmm I wonder where Goten and Trucks went off too?...
Oh well. Anyway I enjoyed these matches. I knew 18 was going to get her ass kicked. I knew Krillin and Piccolo would as well.
I think Gohan held his own pretty well considering he hadn't fought in a while. I kinda expected Goten to lose to Trucks although I wish he would've put in more effort.
Now when Trucks fought Vegeta I felt that there was going to be some damage done. But geez not that much lol.
The triplets are just so adorable. I could eat them up!
Now it's time for the match we are ALWAYS waiting for.
GOKU vs VEGETA FIGHT *Bing* Rings the bell
Oh wait wait wait!
*Pulls out giant number one thumb, soda hat and large armchair with popped pop corn on the table.*
Ok Now fight! |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/12/11 . chapter 18Sorry I couldn't review on the last chapters. My computer went stupid.
Now on to this chapter. Trust me I've read chapters wayyyyyyyyy longer then this one. And believe me I don't care. I love long chapters. It just makes ths troy longer for m to read.
The fight between the triplets was perfect. I kind of figured that Vienna would win.
I love your sense of humor in this chapter.I think I laughed at every other sentence. You're a freaking genius for writing this. I LOVE IT!
Now let's see what happens in the next fight. |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/12/11 . chapter 14Ohhhh the triplets are just to cute! I love them to pieces. And they're already gaining spearate personalities.
I thought that Vienna would be the problem child since she was the only girl but I guess not.
It seems Aizel is the big bad brat of the three of them. Yes he got that from Vegeta and he has Goku's wild characteristics.
Then there's Lysander his personality is somewhat a little of both of them. Calm, laid back, but likes fighting and learning. Hmmm sweet kid.
I loved the lemon. You make them so awesome. |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/12/11 . chapter 12Ok nevermind this is my favorite chapter. I jsut love Vegeta's method of teaching.
I tried not to laugh but when Aizel put the fork into the socket I nearly died from laughter. Vegeta said to let him do and perhaps he'll learn. I thought that was rich! I couldn't believe it.
Then the swimming lesson was so mega funny. He told them to learn or drown. Wow I swear Saiyans are so crazy but hell it's the best way tp learn survival. No wonder they're so strong.
Poor Goku, I didn't know he was still feeling insecure about Vegeta's feelings for Bulma. Screw her Vegeta's better off with Goku anyway. He doesn't have time for someone who
s always going to bitch and whine. |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/12/11 . chapter 11* Giggles happil* Awwww I adored this chapter. It was so much fun! I loved it. The babies are just precious. And the names worked perfectly. Awwwww I could melt from all the fluffy sweetness in this chappie. It was so adorable.
I LOVED IT! |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/12/11 . chapter 10Come on Goku! Any man with sense knows that a pregnant person doesn't want to be touched during the birthing process. Geez my friend was like that when she was pregnant. Damn near broke my arm and hand.
Then there were the mood swings, the cravings, UGH!
Sorry got off track. Soooo we have two boys and a girl huh? Damn I can alreayd tell this girl is going to be a problem for them. The boys too but not as much as the girl will. Ohhhh they're going to have some issues here LOL.
CONGRAULATIONS GOKU AND VEGETA! |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/12/11 . chapter 9I'm going to cry. Wow Vegeta lost the boy. Both of them wanted a son and now they possibly lost their only chance at having one. That's just so sad.
Boy things are starting to look mild for them. Now we find out Bulma's pregnant? Damn I hope it's not Vegeta's but hell she says it is.
I thought it was cute when Goku felt the babies kicking against his mate's stomach. Awwwww |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/12/11 . chapter 8NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUCKING NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
VEGETA LOST THE BABY!
OH GOD NOOOOOOO!
Oh pelase I hope I'm wrong. Please say Vegeta didn't lose his baby! I'll cry if my sweet saiyan lost his baby! How in the hell did that happen? Was he stressed? Did he eat something bad?
Oh poor Vegeta and Goku.
(I'm still shocked by teh fact that he was carrying four cubs by the way too.) |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/12/11 . chapter 6Geez chi chi was a bitch but I had to expect that from her. She does hvae a terrible temper.
I wasn't surprised with Bulma's reaction either. But at least she was kind enough to give them a house.
Fish Things? I couldn't stop laughingat that. It was too cute. |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/11/11 . chapter 5Wow so Trucks got Goten Pregnant huh? Trucks is such a freaky saiyan lol. He rutted with Gohan and Goten (Goku's spawn number 1 and number 2) That was mega funny.
I feel so bad for Vegeta. I hope he decides to keep the baby anyway. Hopefully he won;t lose this one like his first. |
 PhoenixDiamond 3/11/11 . chapter 4HOLY SMOKES! Wow so Vegeta has a high chance of having more then one cub huh?...Awesome. More babies!
Poor Vegeta. I didn't know he already had a baby and she died while he was young. The poor dear.
I hope this pregnancy will be easy on him. |