oh. dear. god. NICE ONE SHOT!

kiiwiishortcake

Whoa. That’s hardcore. This was a creepy line: “Granger, if you kill me, just think you’d kill the first person you made love to, the first person you loved,” He was advancing toward her.

You can’t choose who you love. Good story, good luck with your writing.

OMG! You killed him! :( :( :( Damn Harry. He's so nosey! I'm very sad. Great Fic.!.

Haley

wow that was really good i have enjoyed that plez continue writing cuz you so good at it luv ya yout biggest fan.

Bridget

that was something different... it was like you took a bunch of different emotions, rolled them up into a ball, and threw them at your keyboard. I think I liked it, but I'm not done deciding yet..