The best word I can think of to describe this is lovely. The writing and flow of words has such a tranquility about it, the same kind that Ennis and Jack find in the water, surrounded and suffused by the "acceptance of the natural world." I love stories that are small slices in time, that don't require huge amounts of exposition to explain what they mean but pack all their power into a short vignette much like Proulx did, and this really has that element to it.

And now I come back to my original word... lovely work :) Very poetically and beautifully rendered. Thank you :)

very good! whana reade more about it..so please hurry up.. =)

prettily written

This story is so beautiful... the way the describes the setting and the characters evokes the feelings I had when I read the short story. Keep on writing..

so poetic. Great job of capturing the characters. thanks for the good read!

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Frek

Aw that was really great!