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| kallou 2008-08-24 ch 1,  | abuseXD more plz |
| GreenRose58 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseVery cute one-shot! I like the idea of Gaara getting his first dream. The only recommendation I would like to give is make sure you double check your story for typos and unnescessary words. There were quiet a few typos but I could definately follow the story. All in all, it was really cute! Thanks for posting : ) |
| froXenshadow 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abusehope you can continue this story |
| animemistress209 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abusethat was teerible...very terrible...terribly...awesome...that...is... |
| PGNarutoFan 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseIt was extremely good and has potential to be continued. 2 Thumbs Up. |
| hakusho14 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abusei liked it! if u could it would be cool if u made a sequel or added on another chapter!! |
| heketerine 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abusethis story is great. it could use a few more chapters though. please. |
| Kyo-my-Love 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuse...hm, not sure. I like it but there's just something about it. Something that's good. Oh, Gaara. OFC. Not all that much but still. I liked it dispite that. Later. |
| Kirito Shi 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseits good i like it so update soon |
| Confuzzled239 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abusecool |
| sasusaku-gaasaku4lyfe 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseAWSOME THIS WAS SO AWSOME!! |
| Kinomoto Neko 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI just love this story and (like on the last one I just reviewed) you should continue with it, you are a really great author! Oh and I read your profile, you said you don't have Word, well if you ever want a beta-reader (someone to look over your story to make sure it's grammatically correct) then just ask! Ja ne! |
| estrela jem 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuselol that was so cute! You should continue at least for one more chapter! ^.^ |
| loveXable 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI like where this story is going and i hope you continue! please update soon! |
| Lady Enomis 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this story. The only thing is you can expand on it and go even further. I'd like to see that, but this is really good. |